A great story. Very good.

That was really sad, but I liked it. Great job.

Oh wow. You know, this is REALLY good.
Well, I don't like the type of writing where it's "you".
But I'm biased, and if I wasn't, then it would be REALLY REALLY good. XD
I like how Draco tries to be better at the end.
But why do they call each other by their last names if they're married?

Absolutely beautiful, as always

Wow. Like the second person touch. Also, the element of mystery with "her" (though I'm assuming that she was a daughter that died...?).

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...Wow. Just wow.

I'm guessing they lost a daughter together and Draco couldn't deal with it so he took off? Sounds very much like him. But I like the way you told the story and how well it played out. Amazing. I adored it. Bless you for your marvelous story ideas and the way you let them flow so freely.

oh attica... this is just superb... i can actually feel the emotion throughout the story.. well done..

Ahh love how much emotion just flows off the screen with your writing... Loved it!

It's sad, it's moving, it's heart-wrenching. The situation they went through is terrible, and the fact that they couldn't cope with it together is even worse. However, the sea is always bringing new waves to the shore. I hope they can take a tide.
Very good one-shot! Happy to have read something of yours!

Impeccable, as usual. I can't tell you how much I love your Dramione stores... but they're amazing. This was a moving one-shot, and I love the style with which you wrote it.
Keep writing!
~S

I love the second person narration, how it's continuous throughout the whole thing, but you never lose the intensity of emotion. And how you slowly learn the story between them, but only through the dialogue... Though we don't know who "she" is.. is it Ginny? Or maybe a child Hermione's carrying?

Brilliantly awesomely amazing story--such a lovely little snippet of writing! *glomps*

Once again you write a brilliant one-shot, kudos. You are awesome!

Oh, attica. What a lovely piece. You've told so much with so few words. Glad to see Draco finally manned up and came back. Hope all's well, and update the other bits soon! :D

Wow, why are all your stories so great? It's been a long time since I read a Draco/Hermione story and thank God I read yours. It's so great and I love it very much. Keep writing, please!

I'd love to see some sort of companion piece to this to see what happened afterwards...but really, this is perfect all on it's own. Very sad, and emotional, and just...perfect. WONDERFUL job, I enjoyed it a lot. :D:D Favorited!