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| Cascaper 2008-05-08 ch 1,  | abuseWhoa. There's a pairing I haven't read before...and such a quick and tragic ending I was left staring at the screen. One part of me is going "That's IT? But it was so good!" and the other says, "Well, it is fairly long for being based on a fanart piece, and nothing lasts forever." At any rate I did enjoy it quite a bit. The only thing is it seems to have been typed in rather a hurry- the use of 'to' for 'too' and occasional omission of contractions ("...with [a] bloody piece of paper" would've read better) betray this. Also typos like "getnly" for "gently" would probably have been caused by hasty typing. But overall, I really liked it. A bit of tragedy is never awry in this fandom. |
| Missufishy 2008-05-08 ch 1, | abusesad but really good |