 earlymorninglight12 2009-11-06 . chapter 1Um, okay! I like the part when Shinji yells he caught a Bibarel! Woo! Fun-ny!
thanks
earlymorninglight12 |
 Pikachuand Dawn rule13 2009-10-19 . chapter 1great and funny one shot |
 Xinyii xo 2009-07-20 . chapter 1lawl~~ that was so cute~~
I cant believe Shinji did that though XD, but it was enjoyable XDD
~xy.xo~ |
 DarknessFlameWolf 2008-09-06 . chapter 1This was cute, and I can see why Hikari would be scarred. Imagining that is scary!! Awesome job! |
 Jordan-Daniel 2008-07-17 . chapter 1Too funny xD. If he had known Ash longer he should have released Torterra because its too strong ;) like Charizard and Co.
I enjoyed reading this short story!
Greetings,
J-D |
 Yurippe 2008-06-15 . chapter 1lol |
 ikarishipper900 2008-06-10 . chapter 1lol! that would be scarring. lol luv it! |
 SportyGurl1997 2008-06-01 . chapter 1ROFL! |
 SRHtheHedgehog 2008-05-29 . chapter 1Omg, this was so cute xD I think I might be scarred just by imagining it o.O |
 The Digital Gate 2008-05-29 . chapter 1That was hilarious. I can't stop grinning. |
 HarvestGirl10 2008-05-11 . chapter 1Sorry for not reviewing before! I said it was great on serebii but now i'll give a proper review XD .
OMG! I feel so bad for hikari! and like her, IVE BEEN SCARRED! The image of shinji acting like satoshi with torterra acting like pikachu was hilarious though!! I always look forward to your stories, they're so good!!
Keep up the awesome work!! |
 Akane Naomi 2008-05-11 . chapter 1Haha! Hilarious! XD Hm, but now that you mention it, Satoshi really does seem to do that all the time, lol. :P |
 Kimbley A-Splode 2008-05-11 . chapter 1I HAVE BEEN SCARRED! Lol. Loved it! |
 maripinkkirby 2008-05-08 . chapter 1I can't imagine Paul acting like Ash...that would be creepy, I guess Dawn feeling pretty stupid for suggeting that ^_^ Nice fic! |
 Joyce1237 2008-05-08 . chapter 1LOL! I knw. Ash is like the only one that does a wierd celebration thing, everytime he geats a badge. ^_^
8:27 p.m. Joyce1237 |