Um, okay! I like the part when Shinji yells he caught a Bibarel! Woo! Fun-ny!
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earlymorninglight12

great and funny one shot

lawl~~ that was so cute~~

I cant believe Shinji did that though XD, but it was enjoyable XDD

~xy.xo~

This was cute, and I can see why Hikari would be scarred. Imagining that is scary!! Awesome job!

Too funny xD. If he had known Ash longer he should have released Torterra because its too strong ;) like Charizard and Co.
I enjoyed reading this short story!
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J-D

lol

lol! that would be scarring. lol luv it!

ROFL!

Omg, this was so cute xD I think I might be scarred just by imagining it o.O

That was hilarious. I can't stop grinning.

Sorry for not reviewing before! I said it was great on serebii but now i'll give a proper review XD .

OMG! I feel so bad for hikari! and like her, IVE BEEN SCARRED! The image of shinji acting like satoshi with torterra acting like pikachu was hilarious though!! I always look forward to your stories, they're so good!!

Keep up the awesome work!!

Haha! Hilarious! XD Hm, but now that you mention it, Satoshi really does seem to do that all the time, lol. :P

I HAVE BEEN SCARRED! Lol. Loved it!

I can't imagine Paul acting like Ash...that would be creepy, I guess Dawn feeling pretty stupid for suggeting that ^_^ Nice fic!

LOL! I knw. Ash is like the only one that does a wierd celebration thing, everytime he geats a badge. ^_^

8:27 p.m. Joyce1237