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Reviews for: Two Warriors
Stretch
2009-05-03 . chapter 1
Your pure, unadulterated fluff makes my heart fill with glee :)
Maddie Loves Cows
2008-06-19 . chapter 1
Yay! This was good.
GovernorDerek
2008-05-21 . chapter 1
it was nice but acording to the storyline Mai is the one Zuko is in love with up with, and Katarra is in love with with aang Please editied this to make it betterm

besdies that it was a good little read ^_^
AlleluiaElizabeth
2008-05-14 . chapter 1
This is so adorable. Portrays Sukka beautifully. Especially the line "but Suki and I have a nasty habit of thinking the other needs our constant protection". Also appreciated the little zutara you threw in there.

Nice one shot! :)
razzledazzle41191
2008-05-14 . chapter 1
Short but sweet. I loved it!
oOSukiOo
2008-05-10 . chapter 1
I love it... maybe it is sokka´s diary... please write more!
Phoenix Wingz
2008-05-09 . chapter 1
That's cute and would make a great 'what if' post-war ending. XD Good job.
Rose Gilmore
2008-05-08 . chapter 1
That was very sweet, i'm not used to the writing style. I think the storylines great. :D
WhisperToMeSoftly
2008-05-08 . chapter 1
Yay cookies!

Anyway, I had actually read this story before without reviewing, but I saw your pleas for reviews on the forum so I decided to oblige. :)

Just to start off: I liked it. It was well-written, mildly sweet, and it tied off everything real well!

Except for Katara being Fire Lady. -antiZutarian- :P But anyway.

I couldn't really find anything wrong with it in terms of writing. It was very descriptive, and the style was very personal (coming from Sokka). My only complaint (which isn't really a complaint, since this piece was perfectly fine) is perhaps next time have a little bit more character interaction? I don't know--it seemed like you were summing up the series (which you were). It isn't necessarily a bad thing, since it was a good read, but it would be more interesting if it was perhaps a bit less storytelling and a bit more...emotion. You know what I mean?

Voila. My little bit of concrit for you. :D Sukka part was very sweet, good job overall!
BoogiepopShippuden
2008-05-08 . chapter 1
That's a pretty good story, but I can't find just the right adjective.
It seems too serious for me to call it 'cute' or 'sweet', but it was a great story.
It was well written and I liked getting to read Sokka's thoughts.
I liked it!
danielle134
2008-05-08 . chapter 1
I liked it.
It was interesting to see what it was like after the war through Sokka's eyes.
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