Wow. You've already heard my thoughts on this, but I just have to reiterate again...you are a truly amazing writer for making this scenario actually believable to me. Never in a million years would I have considered Joe having feelings for Callie -- and yet, you made it perfectly plausible. Your insight into Joe's character astounds me. And kudos to you for keeping the reader guessing as to "Frank's girl's" identity till the end -- I was so sure it was Nancy that Joe was referring to, not Callie.

Wonderful writing, chica -- can't wait to read more from you!

Wow, i wasn't expecting that! But it was a great piece of writing! Very in depth way of looking at how Joe feels. I couln't in my wildest dreams even imagine them two together. But the way you brought it out in his head was very normal thinking on his part. Very realistic! Well done!

Now THAT is an interesting idea that I don't believe I've seen before...

You did a good job with the story, and it is an interesting concept. I don't know if I can really picture it, but I do have to say it is a novel idea! Thanks for sharing it!

Very different and very good. Well written. Not a pairing I would consider, but that's what makes it so well written. Really nice little piece.

This was good, Katie! Very different. I've never thought of Joe ever wanting to have a chance with Callie. (How did you come up with this idea?) But you got into his head so well here, I find the possibility believable.

Wonderful job done. :)

Ooh, that's interesting! And very good job of getting into Joe's head, btw - wonderful!

that was good it was so intresting and different.i often wondered about that myself,seeing they were also in each others face.but nah they are too much alike.that is why i think she is a better fit for frank.