i have to say, i was gonna pass up this story, but i read the first chapter, and i was hooked.
this is such a good story about erasers, probably one of the best i've ever read. better yet, it's very in-depth and cleverly-written. you should really finish it, because it holds a lot of potential.
anyways...keep updating!

This is a great story so far. I love the social hierarchy of the Erasers and the prose is wonderful.

This is a great story. I like the way you wrote in, in present tense, because you kept it constant and it sounds really good. I liked the idea. Keep it up!

~ Max

yay! you're continuing the story! thanks!

Hey, sorry I haven't reviewed this yet! I've been so busy, and I just sort of forgot to...Better late than never, though, right?

Anyway, excellent first chapter. I think I like it even more the second time I read it. Random question...do you think Roma got killed? I think she did, which is sad, but oh well. It's a recurring theme in our fics, people dying :p

As you know, Knife/Ursula is the new Maega/Mari/Figgy, in my opinion, but your characterization of him kicks ass anyway. I just like him and Ursula hooking up and producing cute little red-haired green-eyed future-serial-killer babies.

The bell's about to ring, so I have to go, but I loved the fic, as always :)
O.G.