 JadeWhispers 10/4/01 . chapter 1_ Nice fic... It's a bit choppy in some parts, though o_O* Erm... The message itself is good, but the style isn't the greatest... _ Keep writing, though... (I'm scanning through only fics that intrigue me so that tells you something... _ and I'm extremely critical so don't ever let anything i say get you down... D Not that I expect it to...) mm'kay... good job! |