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Very nice. The only thing that bothered me is the neck injection, because generally anything stuck in the neck would probably kill you.

wow, great read. way to keep Shinjiro, Mitsuru, and Akihiko in character. I can actually see this as part of the game to reveal more about the three original SEES members. overall great job, hope you'll write more concerning these characters.

I loved it :)

The descriptions are really effective and the characterization is great. Shinjiro really does walk a fine line, and you presented that very, very well. It's difficult to write him, because there's a tendency either to make him too much of a dick, or not enough of a dick... ;) But you nailed it. Everyone was incredibly well written, actually. He's just the one that stuck out the most, because I think he's the hardest to portray.
I love fics centered around the original SEES members, because they have a really interesting dynamic.
Your recent review means even more to me now that I see you've written a really kick ** fic. :)

Oh...very nice ^^
I love, LOVE the three senpais in the game, so this is a treat! Love the fact that they're in-character too, by the way.

Just one minor thing I'd like to point out. If I remember correctly, Aegis does not call Mitsuru with the prefix -senpai. I think she uses -san.

I'd love to read more of your stuff.

You really captured the dynamic of the characters in an interesting story! I look forward to reading more of your work.

I like how you've explored the dynamics between Mitsuru and Shinjiro. The game doesn't really show us that, so your perspective was interesting. Also, the dialogue between Akihiko and Shiji was very plausible.

I really enjoyed that! It's rare to see them so in-character.

Hmm, this was a very interesting read. It's great to see all of them so in character and I like the interactions between Shinji and Mitsuru too. It's a shame we didn't see much of them talking to one another in the game.

I see no need for this to be rated M, though. =P It wasn't that gory or violent anyway (IMO, at least).

Wow, you kept all the characters practically In Character and, even though it was lengthy, I liked this story a lot. I can see Strega trying something like that in the game but then again, they're already insane and diabolical in their own.. freakish nature. Awe, Shinjiro does still care about his friends and damn... I can see Akihiko getting really miffed over the situation.

Overall, excellent story. I wanna see more from you in the future if possible.