loved it

...wow... Those are words I never thought would come out of the Edward in my mind's mouth. I can't remember ever wanting to slap Edward so hard that his head would explode, but I guess there's a first time for everything! I also want to give Carlisle a big hug for admitting that things were different now.

Chi_

I..um...hmm. It's well written and very creative, but...I love Bedward so much, and yes, I know the summary warns us not to read it. But the smut ones don't bother me because they're less...emotional. This is just a really interesting take on things and it really made me wonder...it's so possible that you can't just shove it out of your mind like you can with the smut. It could be true, so I just hope I don't think about things being this way next time I read the books haha. But seriously, really well written :)

Short, sweet, and to the point.

I have ot admit, I love the Edward/Carlisle pairing :)

Sam.

ah I think I'm going to cry :( that was so good to short though I only say that cause I loved it and need more :)

Very sad... i it! Great short story!

wow. intriguing! update soon.

Very sad, but i like it.

Interesting choice for a short story but i kinda liked it

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Oh, poor Edward. He just wants to be loved! I'm glad this was short, it was so sad. But well-written, as always!

i got confused. but it was good!

jordan

OMG! So good!

Well.. It is good, but SO sad, plus I like it better when they sleep together:)