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Reviews for: My Biggest Secret
Metakaze
1/16/09 . chapter 3
Ah, what a great story. I've never even played the StarForce games and I already love this pairing. XD

Lolz, you did a great job. :D
GaruAlpha
10/14/08 . chapter 3
The cuteness makes it better.
EVA-02
8/23/08 . chapter 3
Great story.

I hope to see more from you!
King of Everything
7/20/08 . chapter 3
YAY! Luna and Geo forever! This was a great chapter and I personally loved the way Geo showed Luna his affections. Luna is perhaps one of my all time favorite characters from any video game and certainly my favotite megaman girl character. That was one of the sweetest last lines I can remember from any story. 10/10 without a doubt!
Niilan
7/20/08 . chapter 3
This was wonderful. I think this was a great ending. Well written, and cute. ^^
rini124
7/18/08 . chapter 3
Thank you! :D And I loved this very much
King of Everything
7/8/08 . chapter 2
Awesome! I love LunaxSubaru, it is my second favorite Megaman pairing and my favorite from the Battle Network/Starforce series. I love how Subaru freaked out when Luna told him that her parents still didn't seem to care much about her (of course that in and of itself made me sad as Luna is one of my favorite characters). Hope that you update this soon, I will be waiting.

P.S. Veve, there is a difference between being a harsh critic and being a louse. Pointless meaness will only make people not like you. If that is your only problem with this story then just leave at let it be apreciated by people who do like it.
Niilan
7/7/08 . chapter 2
Cute. They both still have their insecurities, but want to be honest about their feelings. Great job.
rini124
7/7/08 . chapter 2
I love this story so much
BraveEagle
6/1/08 . chapter 1
I don't care if is SxM or SxL but one thing I know, if you have played and payed attention on the game you will see how Subaru starts to be Luna's ''secret bodyguard'' , even when he saved her from Ophiuca, he was still worried about Luna's health and was thinking of staying in her bedroom until she woke up, that was when

Luna developed a ''secret crush'' on Subaru, but of course she has her pride and won't admit this to Bud,Zack, only to herself.

Only more thing,she isnt possesive,she is just afraid of losing her friends, because the parents... it's look like she haven't ever have real ones.

Wow! Long review but i have to do this, great history! Yay! xD
Support the Justice
5/11/08 . chapter 1
This is a nice story. I wish the anime hadn't killed Luna's charatcer. (To the review below: dude, this is not the place to crush a story because of your own biases on what is not even the content of the story. I don't really care either way on Ryuusei pairings, but you're just being rude. Go complain on a forum, but don't chase people away from a good story just 'cause you don't like the pairing the author chose!) Please keep writing, budding author.
Veve
5/11/08 . chapter 1
Hate it. Luna/Subaru never works. Luna's crush is totally superficial. Misora/Subaru rocks! Story ok, pairing, in my opinion, sucks.
Niilan
5/8/08 . chapter 1
I like it. ^^ Misora needs to learn that the whole world doesn't revolve around her. Anyway, good job. I look forward to the next chapter.
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