Beautifully heart-breaking. I love reading well written S/L, and this was. Lovely characterisation and a good mix of romance, angst, and sorrow. Well done!

Heart-breaking! Good writing! :)

Awwhh
This definetley shows a diffrent side to Severus
Well done (:

This was just lovely. Bittersweet. :)

Well done.

There are so many things I wish he had said, too! Thanks for this sad, sweet story. It shifts nicely from a sense of innocence to frustration to regret. Thanks for writing :)

Oh, my God. I don't even know what to say. Short, angsty, adorable, heart-wrenching...and I don't feel like that's enough to tell you how much I love it.

thats a really good story! i think i like the 3rd best, but all three are great. sad tho.