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Reviews For: Laid Bare - Reviews: Page 1 of 4

caro-gsr
2008-08-08
ch 16,
abusegreat chapter! can't wait for the next one and for more GSR
plz ud soon
GSRLover1
2008-08-04
ch 16,
abusemore plzz
El Gringo Loco
2008-08-03
ch 4,
abuseCh 1-4 lay an interesting foundation. I look forward to reading more about what get's built on it.
toothchick
2008-08-03
ch 16,
abuseI am glad to see this story again!! I can't wait for the next update!
Coldtrain
2008-05-25
ch 15,
abuseAw lol this is so cute! Who knew Ecklie could be this kind! he he he keep going!
TiaRat
2008-05-20
ch 14,
abuseEven the naughty bits were in character!
toothchick
2008-05-20
ch 15,
abuseStill amazed at a human (and actually nice) Ecklie!
sprat
2008-05-20
ch 15,
abuseGreat
Coldtrain
2008-05-20
ch 14,
abuseAw I loved it ! :) :D:D:D

Keep going !!
sprat
2008-05-19
ch 13,
abuseAnother great chapter
caro-gsr
2008-05-19
ch 12,
abusegreat chapter! this jeff guy looks so sweet :) I love gsr :P
pla update soon
sprat
2008-05-16
ch 11,
abuseThat was good
stareagle
2008-05-16
ch 11,
abuseAwesome story that grabbed me from the first chapter and tore my insides out with the grief that Gil experienced from chap 1. I am glad that Sara recognized her selfishness. The tornado - perfect storm was a nice touch, especially considering all the weird weather, and what a great place for it- Jackpot! Great irony.
I look forward to how the discussion will go, and imagine a bare all talk...
Thanks for sharing a great tale.
Coldtrain
2008-05-15
ch 11,
abuseGood!! They made it up! :) Keep going!
toothchick
2008-05-15
ch 11,
abuseGreat line from Gil: ...she was looking, I was not...I could hear him saying that, so matter-of-factly. It wouldn't have crossed his mind!
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