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xox 2008-10-02 ch 8, anon.	abusehey, i absolutely adore all of your work, but i just wanted to let you know that some of us are really really REALLY waiting for that sequel to Chimera. any chance you'll begin it before you finish up with this one? :\ anyway, as for this fic, i love all the suspense that's building up. I hope Vaje knows what the heck he's doing and i'm not sure what to think of alex! Oh, and.. if Cougar and Toya don't end up together later on, I will weep. As much as i like blue, i think toya deserves to be truly happy.
Clairavance 2008-10-02 ch 8,	abuseAh ha, as long as I have internet access I will never need to go to the library again. I just love reading this story. Another well written chapter! Your effort and creativity is much appreciated :)
xxx Queen Of Slayers xxx 2008-10-01 ch 8,	abuseAwesome! I absolutely adored this chapter! Interesting to see what will happen with the relationships between Coughar/Blue/Toya and Lisa/Alex... (Love that name! :D! Alex Pettyfer!) x QoS x
Hera Night 2008-09-30 ch 8,	abuseAnother excellent chapter, as per usual =) Highlights were the fight between Blue and Lisa (because I don't love him, ouch!) and finding out fairies are involved in this YAY Not the cuddly, bluebells and pixie dust type either. Real fairies, or how they were supposed to be in mythology. Evil and dark. Can't wait to see more about Vaje's adventures there.
Jezebel Montgomery 2008-09-30 ch 8,	abuseHey! So I dont have constructive feedback, and since Im not sure where you're headed with this, I don't even have an opinion worth voicing. I do however have to tell you that I love the way you're tying everything and everyone in, whether or not I like the story. That part is amazing. Im actually taking a class right now in the Arthur legends and how each story has evolved from older stories. It's interesting to see how your story, while not even close to being completed, fits so well into the category and intricate storylines that my prof keep sshoving down our throats. Good Work, -Jez
untilhellfreezesover 2008-09-30 ch 8,	abuseBest. Eid present. Ever. How happy was I when this turned up in my inbox??!
Izzy 2008-09-29 ch 8, anon.	abuseYou have painted a terrifying picture of the Fey which makes me wince (and more), but I like it. Your descriptions are so imaginative. Good luck Vaje! Please post soon!
terrorofthehighway 2008-09-29 ch 8, anon.	abuseYay for a new chapter! I love this story much more than the others, mostly because of Alex. This chapter showed an awesome Lisa-Blue fight scene- why didn't she show off like this in Chimera? A lot of Lisa's randomness seems to have been lost, especially from Chimera. Was that an act or a part of her that changed (highly unlikely), or just that all the people getting their soulmates around her reminded her of her lost one or that she was just heartbroken by Cern's rejection? Speaking of Cern, well, I'm guessing he dies in this story (since he's a pawn, and your Haloed synopsis says that there's no way to differentiate between the players and the pawns), or that he becomes a lot stronger. But don't give him too hard a time. Or maybe I'm reading too much into this thing. Genevieve is the painter mentioned in Portraiture, isn't she? Did she ever paint one of Alex? How did she know Alex was back? Or "back" at all, if he had been just hanging around looking for Lisa? (And killing people who knew him- his motive will be revealed later?) Why didn't she look for him earlier? Can't wait to see how this develops- what happens to Vaje, and hopefully Ross (and his soulmate) get more than a phonecall.
Devi Lethe 2008-09-28 ch 8,	abuseOh, poor Vaje. I've always liked him. The scene with Lisa and Blue was delightful. It illustrated very well a shift in perspective for me. The real change to Lisa -- older, smarter, wiser, in many ways more cunning. Strange to think of her as so... capable.
Shang Leopard 2008-09-28 ch 8,	abuseSo cool!! This is really neat. I can't say that I know much about Arthurian legends/stories and the like, so this is really educating! Shang Leopard
The Cyan Knight 2008-09-28 ch 8,	abuseoh...plot twists. XD I love plot twists. XD eh.
Lethe 2008-08-23 ch 7, anon.	abuseI was referring to the story involving both Vaje and Blue that also includes necromancy. I don't quite remember the title, but I also don't imagine Blue left that particular spell alone seeing as it was the only successful spell on record, and Blue does like perfecting nasty things. He also has a few more cards in hand than anyone else at this juncture. Inside perspective on Jal, access to Cern's increasing mania, the willingness to exploit that mania, a tendency to experiment using people he knows through Toya... I just see a large number of possibilities spinning out of this one, and most of them involve Vaje in various states of pain. I'm also wondering how you're going to spin Loholt considering the impossibility of made-vampire reproduction. Neve's machinations, perhaps?
Yen 2008-08-20 ch 7, anon.	abuseThe flashback to Lisa's past was great. Really interested to find out more about Lisa and maybe why she could never catch pancake-flips. :) Yen.
Hera Night 2008-08-19 ch 7,	abuseYay I got my wish fulfilled in the beginning of the chapter =D Your flashback scene was excellent and I'm glad to hear that there will be more to come. Great chapter overall! Alex is shaping up to be a great character, your scene with him and Lisa was terrific. There's a lot of chemistry between the two of them despite technically being enemies. I'm also very interested to see who this "bright and beautiful and forgotten" woman turns out to be. I have my suspicions, but I'll keep them to myself and see if I'm right ;) More please!!
Shelli 2008-08-18 ch 7, anon.	abuseThis was the best chapter yet. Alex is shaping up to be one of your best villains - as twisted as Ross, as heartless as Therese, as powerful as Fireblade. His powers over Lisa's friends make him the most threatening enemy they've ever faced, so I can't wait to see them triumph this time - no doubt after a long hard struggle which will require them to grow up a bit more. If you make Cougar lose out to Blue in any way, again, you will break my heart. One of these days Cougar's going to come off better in a confrontation between them - if only because none of us will ever suspect it. Cern. You created him and have power of life and death and horrible agonising mental pain over him. Be a bit nicer. He's ever so sweet and kind. There's nothing dark or nasty in Cern's nature. He's a bit of everything so he doesn't fit anywhere, and the Pack won't take proper care of him. Not like Lisa would. Jallakri ap Ganra didn't deserve to die. Lots of people kill people. Blue kills people. Therese kills people. And Toya's slowly but surely getting there. Why did poor old Jal have to die so cruelly just because a few minor characters got bumped off? That's what they were there for. He doesn't have any real powers. Unlike most of your characters, Cern can't really protect himself. He needs you to do that for him. If all else fails, he can come and live in my attic. The Barbies can squeeze up next to the Lego and make room. Here endeth the List of Reasons to be Nice to Cern. Good luck with the writing. x

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