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Reviews for: Medical Fetish
i-love-me-some-leggypoo
2008-07-17 . chapter 1
Ratchet is a kinky bastard.

(grin)

I like it!
LicoriceSnoCone
2008-05-10 . chapter 1
Something I noticed while reading your fic is that you capitalize words when it isn't necessary. If a word like medic, pet, or medbay is in the middle of a sentence it doesn't need to be capitalized. Those words on their own aren't proper nouns.
Faeline
2008-05-09 . chapter 1
Ooh.

A nice little visit to the Med lab. :)

There were a few paragraphs where, for me, the flow kind of sputtered due to a word being used several times too close together. (And a little blip at the end that Greatest Boba Fett already caught).

But other than that... Nice and descriptive. I like the interaction. I always suspected Ratchet would be good at kinky and dominating.
flamingmarsh
2008-05-09 . chapter 1
O_O oh my! -fans herself- it was good.
ShanDae
2008-05-08 . chapter 1
O_o
M3kSex!
Yum
Glomps!
DemonicSymphony
2008-05-08 . chapter 1
Wow. Well written and descriptive!
The Greatest Boba Fett Fan
2008-05-08 . chapter 1
HOT. This made my day, thank you. I absolutely loved the scenario.

On a nitpick side, I think you meant removing Ironhide's legs from the stirrups, not Rachet's
Apocrypha Blessing
2008-05-08 . chapter 1
O_o Naughty, naughty, naughty Ratchet!
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