 i-love-me-some-leggypoo 2008-07-17 . chapter 1Ratchet is a kinky bastard.
(grin)
I like it! |
 LicoriceSnoCone 2008-05-10 . chapter 1Something I noticed while reading your fic is that you capitalize words when it isn't necessary. If a word like medic, pet, or medbay is in the middle of a sentence it doesn't need to be capitalized. Those words on their own aren't proper nouns. |
 Faeline 2008-05-09 . chapter 1Ooh.
A nice little visit to the Med lab. :)
There were a few paragraphs where, for me, the flow kind of sputtered due to a word being used several times too close together. (And a little blip at the end that Greatest Boba Fett already caught).
But other than that... Nice and descriptive. I like the interaction. I always suspected Ratchet would be good at kinky and dominating. |
 flamingmarsh 2008-05-09 . chapter 1O_O oh my! -fans herself- it was good. |
 ShanDae 2008-05-08 . chapter 1 O_o
M3kSex!
Yum
Glomps! |
 DemonicSymphony 2008-05-08 . chapter 1Wow. Well written and descriptive! |
 The Greatest Boba Fett Fan 2008-05-08 . chapter 1HOT. This made my day, thank you. I absolutely loved the scenario.
On a nitpick side, I think you meant removing Ironhide's legs from the stirrups, not Rachet's |
 Apocrypha Blessing 2008-05-08 . chapter 1O_o Naughty, naughty, naughty Ratchet! |