|Reviews for Stranger in Paradise|
| StarStreakedSky 5/15/13 . chapter 16
This is one of the most amazing BMWW fics I've ever read. Did you abandon it? I need to know. I'd rather know that you left it for sure than keeping hope that you'll update it D:
| Ayz283 4/20/13 . chapter 16
Nice story! I really enjoyed reading it. And it's different and I just love that. But anyways, can't wait to read more of it! :DD
| dymitria 4/11/13 . chapter 16
Great story, really detailed, interesting and thought provoking. Grat idea, nice flow, but what happened?
| guest 4/8/13 . chapter 16
Well damn me to hell and back! Just when its about to get juicy the story stops. Really wish you would come back and finish.
| guest 4/8/13 . chapter 14
I smell a conspiracy ...and maybe regicide?
| jacksmara.freitas 3/27/13 . chapter 16
please, come back
| R-dude 3/13/13 . chapter 16
For some reason I was under the impression that this was somewhat recent, instead of 4 years old.
Well, abandoned or not, I was pleasantly surprised by the story. I wish you'd have finished it.
| R-dude 3/13/13 . chapter 7
So much for Bruce's training.
| R-dude 3/13/13 . chapter 6
So far this has me cautiously optimistic.
| R-dude 3/13/13 . chapter 3
Of course the Trojan war was an invasion of economic interests, and of course atrocities were commited, but not just from the Greek side. There are no "good guys", and the Illiad itself gives us a pretty good idea that both sides were equally terrible.
| R-dude 3/12/13 . chapter 1
I somehow doubt that thousands of Greeks fit into the Horse.
| Trying -Helps 2/22/13 . chapter 3
Not a bad idea. www. /
| Sarsha 2/7/13 . chapter 16
please please please finish this sooon i luv this story and cant wait to see/read what happens! :)
| bu-bu- buttt 1/26/13 . chapter 16
This will most likely be incoherent rambling, since your most interesting story has kept me awake well past what is proper (and perhaps due my novice attempts at writing in English, as well). There is so much in my mind that I will try to express here.
First, not quite important nuance: Your Alexandra reminded me of an Alexa not-so-frequently associated with DC's version of the amazons. A beautiful coincidence, though I thought your rendering of her made much more sense, even if it was completely unintentional, as I suspect.
And then, the good but horribly jumbled: D'aw your scene with Alfred and Bruce. At the table. It was adorable. And hilarious. And cute..until Chill's mention. And then that kiss and all Bruce's happy/lovey emotions coming out full force for the first time. I was like "Whoa, not that I mind, but where is all this coming from?". Overbubbling emotions and all that.
Speaking of emotional, I was devastated when I couldn't hit next. That being the very reason I don't normally review RIGHT after I read a story for the first time. However, I then saw that the last time you updated was in '09 and I am still in a state of panic because I haven't checked your profile for any sign of continuation.
In case you were hoping for more helpful feedback, like for instance, the occasional grammar error (I found few), or odd not necessarily, but bad style quirks feel free to PM me Wajinga Watu. Hopefully, my mind will have solidified from the state it is in now.
| deathnoteno1fan-codegeasslover 1/5/13 . chapter 16
I'm sad this hasn't been up-dated in some time but I do wish I had found this fic sooner. This was what I was looking for a year or two ! Fic!