I enjoyed this movie and I enjoyed this story. Seems like you got the characters' voices down. I enjoy your writing.

Nicely whumpalicious. Thanks.

This was a wonderful story. You write Brendan in a similar way to John Sheppard, but according to what I've heard, those characters are a lot alike. I must confess I have not seen Thoughtcrimes, but I am planning to watch the movie soon and I already know what it's about, since I'm a big fan of Joe Flanigan.

Anyway, I love how you wrote Brendan; his feeling guilty for being the one to live. Freya was very supporting and I liked that. What I also loved was how Brendan's fellow agent and boss cared about him and how Freya told him that he is loved. Thank you for this story! I am already lookinh forward to the next!

As good as ever.

Oh Brendan whump! Yummy! This was a nice little story and some very nice whump for our hero! Thanks for sharing hon.. :)