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LucksFullmoon
2009-11-02 . chapter 3
These are all good, I love the "I almost made out with the guy...oops, you worn't suposed to know that" line from the first chapter. I realy hope you continue with another chapter...maby on the people that Paine left behind?
angelgriever
2009-09-22 . chapter 3
very cute story! please update soon
TheGoddessofDeath
2009-09-22 . chapter 3
You, my friend, have a knack for storytelling. The third chapter was my favourite, though they were all very very well done. Hope to see more of this, even if it's almost been a year since you updated. :)

-TGOD
Warriorcat's Spirit
2009-08-13 . chapter 3
This was so lovely and sweet. You had me smiling sadly all the way though. I'm certain I even teared up a little. Thanks for writing; I really loved this.
xyuffiex
2009-04-11 . chapter 1
Love it x3
Manga Girl number 6
2009-02-04 . chapter 3
I can totally imagine Rikku trying to tell the story.
MG#6
Manga Girl number 6
2009-02-04 . chapter 2
(Big Smile.)
MG#6
Manga Girl number 6
2009-02-04 . chapter 1
Hurray Kingdom hearts Aurikku! (spins around with fireworks and festive stuff...)
Thank You SO Much!
I'm a big Kingdom Hearts I & II fan and FFX & FFX-2 fan.
HURRAY!
MG#6
Mizuki
2008-12-30 . chapter 1
Hmm... About the whole "Rikku, Riku, and Riku Replica" thing... If I'm not mistaken, in Japanese, Rikku's name is actually Ryukku... And us "stoopid" English speakers just couldn't pronounce that right so the translators changed it to Rikku. Not that I mind, Rikku is a much prettier name than Ryukku. Anyway, this was adorable. I believe that I especially like the part where Rikku semi-sorta threatened Sora...

Good stuff.
Youko-Kokuryuuha
2008-11-20 . chapter 3
This was good, La.
uniFsky
2008-11-16 . chapter 3
This is SO cute. I've always liked AuronxRikku, and your writing has just broken through the glass ceiling. You've captured all the little personality quirks that make Auron and Rikku who they are, and then some. Auron will never be a cheery guy, but he has his own silent way of expressing happiness, just like how Rikku will have different glomping intensities. It's really great how you've managed to incorporate their story into Kingdom Hearts as well; double kudos! *grins* A wonderful drabble series, and I hope to read more! ^^
Youko-Kokuryuuha
2008-08-01 . chapter 2
It was a nice chapter, certainly soothing and calming, but I don't think it really oozed Yuna. I certainly felt there were portions of the chapter that resembled her, but I can't quite put my finger on what's missing.

Well, keep doing what you do, La. :D

~Koky
Youko-Kokuryuuha
2008-08-01 . chapter 1
That made my heart melt. Really, it did.

Which is terrible, considering I need it to live, really. :p But that was an amazing piece, La, AMAZING. It simply echoed Rikku, and it was full of personality and humor and-and Rikku.

Excellent job, here. :D

~Koky
Katmillia
2008-06-16 . chapter 2
Wah KH/FFX can make them together again, I love, love, love this idea. xD
Menamebephil
2008-05-22 . chapter 2
Alright, I have returned, and this time I'm not anonymous!

Angsting Yuna is a little odd to read, but you pulled it off well. Poor girl never gets any breaks, does she?

MNBP
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