 LucksFullmoon 2009-11-02 . chapter 3These are all good, I love the "I almost made out with the guy...oops, you worn't suposed to know that" line from the first chapter. I realy hope you continue with another chapter...maby on the people that Paine left behind? |
 angelgriever 2009-09-22 . chapter 3very cute story! please update soon |
 TheGoddessofDeath 2009-09-22 . chapter 3You, my friend, have a knack for storytelling. The third chapter was my favourite, though they were all very very well done. Hope to see more of this, even if it's almost been a year since you updated. :)
-TGOD |
 Warriorcat's Spirit 2009-08-13 . chapter 3This was so lovely and sweet. You had me smiling sadly all the way though. I'm certain I even teared up a little. Thanks for writing; I really loved this. |
 xyuffiex 2009-04-11 . chapter 1Love it x3 |
 Manga Girl number 6 2009-02-04 . chapter 3I can totally imagine Rikku trying to tell the story.
MG#6 |
 Manga Girl number 6 2009-02-04 . chapter 2(Big Smile.)
MG#6 |
 Manga Girl number 6 2009-02-04 . chapter 1Hurray Kingdom hearts Aurikku! (spins around with fireworks and festive stuff...)
Thank You SO Much!
I'm a big Kingdom Hearts I & II fan and FFX & FFX-2 fan.
HURRAY!
MG#6 |
 Mizuki 2008-12-30 . chapter 1 Hmm... About the whole "Rikku, Riku, and Riku Replica" thing... If I'm not mistaken, in Japanese, Rikku's name is actually Ryukku... And us "stoopid" English speakers just couldn't pronounce that right so the translators changed it to Rikku. Not that I mind, Rikku is a much prettier name than Ryukku. Anyway, this was adorable. I believe that I especially like the part where Rikku semi-sorta threatened Sora...
Good stuff. |
 Youko-Kokuryuuha 2008-11-20 . chapter 3This was good, La. |
 uniFsky 2008-11-16 . chapter 3This is SO cute. I've always liked AuronxRikku, and your writing has just broken through the glass ceiling. You've captured all the little personality quirks that make Auron and Rikku who they are, and then some. Auron will never be a cheery guy, but he has his own silent way of expressing happiness, just like how Rikku will have different glomping intensities. It's really great how you've managed to incorporate their story into Kingdom Hearts as well; double kudos! *grins* A wonderful drabble series, and I hope to read more! ^^ |
 Youko-Kokuryuuha 2008-08-01 . chapter 2It was a nice chapter, certainly soothing and calming, but I don't think it really oozed Yuna. I certainly felt there were portions of the chapter that resembled her, but I can't quite put my finger on what's missing.
Well, keep doing what you do, La. :D
~Koky |
 Youko-Kokuryuuha 2008-08-01 . chapter 1That made my heart melt. Really, it did.
Which is terrible, considering I need it to live, really. :p But that was an amazing piece, La, AMAZING. It simply echoed Rikku, and it was full of personality and humor and-and Rikku.
Excellent job, here. :D
~Koky |
 Katmillia 2008-06-16 . chapter 2Wah KH/FFX can make them together again, I love, love, love this idea. xD |
 Menamebephil 2008-05-22 . chapter 2Alright, I have returned, and this time I'm not anonymous!
Angsting Yuna is a little odd to read, but you pulled it off well. Poor girl never gets any breaks, does she?
MNBP |