This is a VERY interesting storyline, and I hope you will come back to this story at some point to write more please ^^

Also is this story posted in the Mai Hime stories section as well? If not it should be, or at least be in the Crossovers section =3

Ne, ne, Satashi! Are you gonna continue this? Or do you want to put it up for adoption?

this is a pretty interesting story it be cool if you could continue it.

Hm... interesting idea, but I'm definitely going to be missing Nina... and Manshiro too... oh well, it still seems pretty interesting...

Uwah this story is awesome. I like it. I hope you update soon! It combines my two favorite animes. Though I think Arf would've been a bit better then Zafira for a helper.

this is a nice story lol

i really hope you write the nxt chapter cuz i really want to read it lol ^_^

I read both chapters of this and I gotta say you've got something going that's very plausable here. Except, I probably would've done it after Mai Otome Zwei. Still, it's a nice start, I don't see why you shouldn't continue with this.

First reaction: LOL. I never made the connection between Otome and Nanoha! But when I think about it, so similar!!
Seems like you haven't updated this in a while...please don't give up on it (;

Oh yeah, interesting choice for Hayate to choose Zafira and Yuuno. I was totally expecting Rein and...Signum, maybe? Caught me offguard D:

Nice job tieing the two series together. Hope you will update.
Wings

it get better the more i read. Keep up the great work.

nice, like it so far, one question this a Fate/Nanoha couple story? eather way I like the story, keep up the great work. can't wait to read more. ^^

Good I like this. You should write more.

Are there any other similar crossovers out there? I guess I'll search.

this story is begging to be updated. PLZ, it's calling out, update update plz, cuz i'm such a great story. Awesomeness on a webpage

Great Story Plz Plz Update It Soon!!

great chapter