umm wow! lolz
i wonder wat will happen next?

Aww. It's cute.

I'd imagine Eliot to be that way, but not Olivia, which grabbed my attention instantly.

Cute, write another!

Kat

Post more soon love it

i did like. very much in fact. you're a pretty good writer. the only thing is there were a TON of grammar mistakes. Before you post, make sure you re-read what you just typed in to make sure that everthing makes sense and you didnt switch letters or something (you did that with "NO" and "ON")
the content was really good though! lol

Luv it! Now if only they would do that on the show...we would all be happy...lol!!

i liked it!

liked? Hell no!! I loved! That was amazing! =] I will nevr look at rooftops the same again lmao especially since I go up on break during work xD

Wow. Just. Wow. THAT WAS INTENSE! Now go work on "Tell Me." :) Just kidding. Great job on this.

EO FOREVER!! LOVED THT!!

I love all of the angst and passion between them. Very intense and being on the roof is a very big plus, lol. Great job!

awe. i loved it. you should write another chapter or two, or three...or a lot!!

love it , can't wait for more :)

who could resist an invitation like that, especially from one elliot stabler? more please :)

I liked it. Is it going to stay a one-shot?

Aww. El and Liv are so cute together.

Great job. Can't wait for the next chapter!

(If there is one.)