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| IloveDally 2008-06-16 ch 5, | abuseIt's is really funny. I hate Curtis Sisters and blast to 2008. Anyway, I loved it it was really funny. |
| HannaMichelle 2008-06-03 ch 5, | abuseWow. LOL this totally made my night! "Her baby was born 9 months premature." Haha, I died when I read that! (That would be one ugly baby..) And it makes me sad how everyone sticks Darry in the chair with a newspaper :( He never gets any fun. This was good :) (And Fire Breathing Panda...lighten up a bit. This is a JOKE fanfic. It's making fun of the people who really do write these kinds of stories. Of course they are Mary-Sues..they're supposed to be.) |
| Fire Breathing Panda 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseI’m not quite sure if this was a joke or not, but if so, it was a very lame one. I only read the first chapter, but I was bored stiff. It wasn’t funny, and Arianna and Yasmin are Mary-Sues to the max. The grammar sucked. If you’d like more in depth criticism, PM me, but I honestly do not think this piece of crap is worth it. |
| Pudden Pops 2008-05-15 ch 4, | abuseoh my god. this story is so horrific that i cant stop reading it! i wanna meet Dally! he is schmexy! can i meet Dally, please! oh and Two-Bit rocks, so i wanna meet him to! and Johnny! and, well, all of em! except Steve...he always seems to have a stick up his butt...actually, yeah i wanna meet him too... X P |
| Jessica LaRae 2008-05-15 ch 4, | abusehaha what's scary is that there are people who seriously write this and think their fanfic is omg so totally awesome! MARY-SUE! You should name a poor abused kid Mary-Sue and Pony and Johnny and Dally and Two-Bit, Steve, Sodapop and Darry all save her in the year 2008! Cause that's never happened in a fic before!! Lyke OMG. |
| Jess McIntosh 2008-05-15 ch 4, | abuseOMG1 U R AWSUM! i called all my firends and told them i had greazers in my bedroom! LOL LOL LOL they thought i wuz saying grease fire at first! ROFL my firend ashley wuld SO jump soda me 2! 2-bit is so funny at mcdonalds happy meal! i knew the jonas brothers wuld be nice and CUTE! maybe when we get back to my house we culd watch the movie and make soda react the shower scene so we culd see who is the hottest him or rob lowe LOLOL and maybe pony culd make out with johnny cus pony/jonny is so HOT ppl tell me reading bad fanfic can rot yur brain so i only read the gud ones like yurs! update asap plz! |
| Jess MacIntosh 2008-05-12 ch 3, anon. | abuseomg! =0 my eyes are purple two! that is so col lol! culd you make them mayB go to the futrue and meet the jonas brothers and put my firends in it rofl ps i know somebody who has a cousin and she sez the jonas brothers really r brothers update asap cuz i want to know what happens next |
| Jess McIntosh 2008-05-11 ch 2, | abuseomg! plz update asap! i wana be named whatall that babys name was! lol lol lol cute! Sorry, got carried away by the fantasticness |
| fanfar3 2008-05-10 ch 2, | abuseLord, I love satire! It's such great satire that I almost peed myself. It's so god-awful (like some of the stuff on this site) that I almost can't read it, it is so painful! I hope I haven't committed any of these sins! hmm...I do have them noshing on the chocolate cake ...perhaps a bit too often..but not THIS bad... LOL |
| Jessica LaRae 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseYAY! What an amazing story!! I like, can't believe how tuff and tough and beautiful Yasmin is and how awesome Arianna is, and like omg she got rapped? What happens? like seriously guys. Did they put in movies in the VCR and cook dinner in the Microwave cause those were all around in like the 60s!! (haha soo kidding. Thanks for writing this, kept me from getting frustrated with the lack of amazing Outsiders fanfic. And seriously, if I see another fic where they have microwaves and VCRs I might scream. Microwaves - 1987, VCR - Late 70s, as well as Cassettes - Late 70s, of course they did have these things before then, but they were in the thousands of dollars to own, and lets face it, the Greasers don't have that kind of money. Maybe the Socs do, but not the Greasers.) |
| Jess McIntosh 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseThe real tragedy of The Outsiders. Glory! Very funny and I hate to say, right on target. |