Hey, not bad! I've begun writing my own Legends 3 fanfiction)four chapters completed so far), and I figured it would do me good to make sure no one else had my idea for what came after Legends 2. While your idea doesn't seem to be anything like mine, it's never the less interesting.

It's also very well written; other than some confusion I encountered in the first paragraph, and some words being capitalized that shouldn't have been, I didn't find many mistakes.

Doesn't look like you're continuing this story. That's too bad, but I suppose there should only be one Legends 3 fanfiction going at a time; and that story is going to be mine! Hope you'll give my fic a chance once I've posted it online. Even though a healthy chunk of it is written, I want to make sure there are no mistaks befor i post itt onlin (/sarcasm).

Well, that's all I've got to say about that!

Long live America!