 Ifritblue 2009-08-01 . chapter 1Good story. |
 I.Can't.Rewrite. 2009-07-16 . chapter 1Total pwnage! This is like, the best I've read in this fandom.
And, nice, you tricked me - I actually thought Zim had gotten caught.
The random words weren't even noticed. ^-^ |
 JerriMaverick 2009-04-20 . chapter 1Hello!
Exellent indeed! You are quite amazing at writing Zim's lines, with my favorite haveing to be either the argument as to Dib not making enough life-juices or the "If I win, can I keep my Dib-thingy?" question. Just thought you'd like to know that.
Toodles! |
 tophis1 2009-03-21 . chapter 1 You HAVE to write another chapter! I wanna know what happens! Even if its just skipping ahead to when the massive arrives. PLEASE?! I need to know!
Oh. BTW, this was an amazing story. Zim is so evil. But it was so interesting! I thought Zim really had been captured at first. LOL. |
 PinkPandaClaws 2009-03-11 . chapter 1I liked it. Interesting. I laughed when I read that you had to use certain words it this. I totally didn't notice anything that seemed out of place. |
 kishluver12 2008-09-18 . chapter 1Whe! you should write more. it's really good. |
 Ms.Ginny Snape 2008-08-22 . chapter 1LOVED IT! (~_~)
-Ginny |
 Lady Chitose 2008-08-19 . chapter 1Wow. That was amazing. I loved the sense of bitterness and remorse throguhout Dib's speech. Their whole deal with destroying Earth sounds like it could work quite well, if they were to put aside their differences. I loved the addition of the sadomasochism because it's so in character and there just isn't enough of it. And nice job on making such a nice oneshot out of such random words too. |
 Chaos of the asylum 2008-08-14 . chapter 1AWESOME!
EvilDib Pure Evil!
MUWAHAHAHAHA!
^-^
I love it
The humans Deserve that Poor Dib!
XD |
 izzyjaneseven 2008-08-11 . chapter 1...
AWSOMETH! |
 EverlightSilvia 2008-06-17 . chapter 1I loved every word of it! Plz, continue writing! I will give you cookies! |
 Rainbow-man 2008-06-06 . chapter 1wow. this is made of love. love and dib. |
 passionateartist 2008-05-27 . chapter 1I LOVED it! I wish it wasn't a one-shot!
"Just make screamy noises if you need anything.” Heh heh. Genius.
Beans |
 Swing-21 2008-05-12 . chapter 1Wha! I loved it! And I can't believe you managed to make such a good one-shot out of these random words, lol. I had pretty much forgotten about it myself (I blame life) and I didn't have an idea anyway, but I'll try to rethink about it :3
Very good, very good, I like deceptive!Dib, he's one piece of hawt ass XD And I didn't even notice where you placed the words :D
Nice fic! Much lovin'!
--Swing |
 Ice Dragon3 2008-05-11 . chapter 1What a great twist at the end. Throughout Dib's whole speech with the press, I got the sense of his bitterness with his past experiences with humanity, but I hadn't realized just how deep his anger went. The whole glasses blocking his eyes, making him emotionally detached, was a great foreshadowing device in retrospect. I love Zim and Dib's collaborated attempt to conquer earth; and scarily enough, I think it would work. Technology is scary enough; add it to Irken technology, and who knows what would happen to us. Great story, I really enjoyed reading this. |