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Sonar
2008-08-27 . chapter 15
That one did sound painful but I can so picture it.
silkendreammaid
2008-08-26 . chapter 13
an interesting collection.. a lot of fun to read..

silken :)
Arden Anam
2008-08-23 . chapter 12
holy crap o.o
Arden Anam
2008-08-23 . chapter 11
MANGA ANIME CROSSOVER! WO!
Arden Anam
2008-08-23 . chapter 9
...
*shrugs*
Arden Anam
2008-08-23 . chapter 6
...

dunt really like that pairing. roy/riza is better, really.

this pairing never made sense, just like the scar/winry pairing
Arden Anam
2008-08-23 . chapter 5
... tis sad.
Arden Anam
2008-08-23 . chapter 4
Nicholas Flamel! lolz!
Arden Anam
2008-08-23 . chapter 3
aw! :3
Arden Anam
2008-08-23 . chapter 2
scar?
& winry?

WTF?
Arden Anam
2008-08-23 . chapter 1
i dunt get it :D
courtXjester
2008-05-12 . chapter 5
oh ouch! poor alphonse. I liked this one. there were some grammar problems, but otherwise i thought it was quite nice. :)
took-baggins
2008-05-10 . chapter 5
ah, these are really great! i can't wait to see more of them!
courtXjester
2008-05-09 . chapter 3
Ah! I loved your first chapter. The irony of it was-well-great! The second one was alright. A little bit more info would have been nice though. I am wondering about the line "it was the first gift you gave to me." You could have completely flipped the mood from the loving one you depicted to one of anger. I don't know...something about that just caught me.
Your third chappie was very cute. To me, you portrayed the bride's nervousness very well (hopefully you wanted to do that and I'm not taking your work out of context :p)
Great job!
Kalez-aka-fiore
2008-05-09 . chapter 1
Amazing first drabble! I love it. *goes to read more*
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