 Sonar 2008-08-27 . chapter 15That one did sound painful but I can so picture it. |
 silkendreammaid 2008-08-26 . chapter 13an interesting collection.. a lot of fun to read..
silken :) |
 Arden Anam 2008-08-23 . chapter 12holy crap o.o |
 Arden Anam 2008-08-23 . chapter 11MANGA ANIME CROSSOVER! WO! |
 Arden Anam 2008-08-23 . chapter 9...
*shrugs* |
 Arden Anam 2008-08-23 . chapter 6...
dunt really like that pairing. roy/riza is better, really.
this pairing never made sense, just like the scar/winry pairing |
 Arden Anam 2008-08-23 . chapter 5... tis sad. |
 Arden Anam 2008-08-23 . chapter 4Nicholas Flamel! lolz! |
 Arden Anam 2008-08-23 . chapter 3aw! :3 |
 Arden Anam 2008-08-23 . chapter 2scar?
& winry?
WTF? |
 Arden Anam 2008-08-23 . chapter 1i dunt get it :D |
 courtXjester 2008-05-12 . chapter 5oh ouch! poor alphonse. I liked this one. there were some grammar problems, but otherwise i thought it was quite nice. :) |
 took-baggins 2008-05-10 . chapter 5 ah, these are really great! i can't wait to see more of them! |
 courtXjester 2008-05-09 . chapter 3Ah! I loved your first chapter. The irony of it was-well-great! The second one was alright. A little bit more info would have been nice though. I am wondering about the line "it was the first gift you gave to me." You could have completely flipped the mood from the loving one you depicted to one of anger. I don't know...something about that just caught me.
Your third chappie was very cute. To me, you portrayed the bride's nervousness very well (hopefully you wanted to do that and I'm not taking your work out of context :p)
Great job! |
 Kalez-aka-fiore 2008-05-09 . chapter 1Amazing first drabble! I love it. *goes to read more* |