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| mariposa sabrosa 2008-05-11 ch 1,  | abuseBeautiful! You captured Uriel so well. He's the toughest of them all, in my opinion, and you handled his characterization wonderfully. I loved the Biblical history, and the apple symbolism. Everything! This killed me: "The Insulator of Mankind hums the Melody of Death Death of Light's embrace and the Spirit's unstated right for Joy" Oh. oh. oh. I really have nothing to criticize. Your language is lovely. Great job ;] |