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| Cal reflector 2008-07-30 ch 1, | abuse*Speechless* Wow! Wow! Wow! This story has made my week. Everything is wonderful, you were very patient in developing their relationship, from frigid and awkward to less awkward as Tamaki rubs off on Eclair until they reach the turning point (which I have to reread because I'm afraid I'm missing something more profound). Eclair's state of mind and feelings feels absolutely authentic. Thank you so much for writing this--it was inspirational. I will also be shameless and beg that you write some more of these two; perhaps from Tamaki's perspective? More of the same would be great too. |
| Moshi Moshi Mai 2008-07-20 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was so good. I pretty much loathed Éclair in the beginning, but after a while, she grew on me, and now she's one of my favorite Ouran characters. You captured her exactly the way I thought she would be if we had gotten the chance to explore her character more. Thanks for this amazing piece! :) |
| Orion-x 2008-06-22 ch 1, | abuseThis is definitely one of the best elcairxtamaki fics around =] it was a lovely read and I love the way you brough Eclair to life rather than just portray her as a spoilt one dimensional French girl -favs- |
| Sirena-Lune 2008-06-17 ch 1, | abuseI love the way you wrote this. You really brought Eclair to life and made her sympathetic in a way few people would dare to. :D |
| CoolGirl 2008-05-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was stunningly beautiful. It's a refreshing change to see someone who doesn't hate Éclair. This was wonderfully portrayed and very in-character. There were some slight typos, which, although they certainly don't detract from the quality, I figured I should mention in an attempt to be constructive. Anyways, this was a unique idea for an AU, and I wholeheartedly commend you for it. |
| kaito142 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseAt last, a good side of Eclair! Most of Eclair's fic make her like a b*h. But actually Eclair is kinda good, just like the way you intepret it in your fic. It's good! |
| teeenaaa 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseOhh...wow =O I never thought I'd actually be able to like Eclair...but your story has made me feel an understanding, a sort of empathy, maybe even sympathy, for her =) I know there are lots of people who hate Eclair, and plenty of Eclair-bashing fics out there, but you've really painted a wonderful picture of her; you've shown that deep insde, she's just a girl, who wants someone to love and accept her. And your Tamaki is simply beautiful; I think you've captured him perfectly as well =) In fact, the whole story is an extremely realistic and plausible take on what would have happened had Tamaki chosen to follow Eclair to France, so really, well done! And thanks very much for this =) |
2008-05-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is a pairing of which I have never read anything before. You've surprised me once again with your skill. And I like how epic well you write such intellectual, regal point of view narrative. It is a completely captivating style of yours and the awesome additional notes about the characters' actual feelings and the like that you put in brackets make me jump for joy. I like the depth of the feelings of those two and the way they dance around each other throughout this story. It's truly lovely, I adore your style more and more with each story, I swear! ♥ I'm looking forward to seeing more awesome fics from you. ^_^ I'd love to have you surprise me with some more intriguing pairings. ^_^ |
| Rochelle the Echidna 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseThis was very good! Except for a few mistakes here and there, this was very in-character and a pleasure to read. I'm happy there are fans out there who don't absolutely hate Eclair ^_^ |