Please come back Ava! We miss you and your story! Have a great Thanksgiving :)

Please update! Pretty please with sugar on top? I'm dying to know what happens, you've got me hooked on this story and I need my fix! Excellent writing.

LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT! Please can you update soon?

please, i'm begging you if jou don't up update soon i'll go nuts! will edward be there on time or not? c'mon just finish the story, or upload a new chapter so all the fans of Extraordinary and evening falls get a little hope for this brilliant story

If you don't review soon I'll write a story where Elisa becomes a vampire, joins the Volturi, and becomes Jane's lesbian girlfriend. I'll do it I swear!

...Ok, maybe I won't. But I do miss this story and hope you have not left us on this cliffhanger to teeter on the side much longer. I am getting dizzy. ...I never pester people for updates, just hoping this is not abandoned! Love your stuff!

UPDATE SOON OR ELSE!Nothing wil stop me from pestering you to update(apart from maybe my own story!) and I want you to update quickly!

Hi there,

I've been reading this story off and on for a couple of days and found myself really enjoying Elisa. About half an hour ago I read the rec on TLYDF and realise that all the reasons pointed out over there are the same as mine for enjoying the character.

I have noticed an improvement in your writing the deeper we get into the story - the characters seem more fleshed out and details become less apparent and more of a background that adds to a rich history.

I do note that TLYDF mentions that this will eventaully turn into a trilogy (?) if so I look forward to following your world.

I initially skimmed through this fic and now am reading more thoroughly. I love it! It flows so well, Elisa is easy to connect with and much more entertaining than Bella. The story feels real and for that is completely immersing.

Great story. I don't understand why the Denali's spent time acting all dramatic instead of making a few bites that take seconds. It doesn't make sense as written.

is she gonna use that weird power again. like when she jumped back in time when she broke the cross?
will she save bella- push her out of the way or mabye jump back further and go into a coma cause the migrane was painful the LAST time>>?
update soon

your really bad at regular updates...amazing story though.

Please continue. I have spent the past two days reading both stories. I need this story to resolve. Please, i need to know if she resets time again.

UPDATE PLEASE?

Oh and Ava. can we please get some Jimmy and Elisa! I know we're involved in the whole " Bella dying" thing but I miss them together! Let's get some Ji-lisa STAT! :)

These last two chapters have been absolutely amazing! This entire story is just phenomenal! I like stories with OC's, but there are very few that are actually worth reading. You've done an amazing job with this! Please update soon!