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| bugaboo107 2008-07-30 ch 5,  | abuseAw. |
| bugaboo107 2008-07-30 ch 4, | abuseForget the 100 word count, this was great! I love how you compare and contrast everyone's move... very nice. |
| bugaboo107 2008-07-28 ch 2, | abuseI liked this a lot. I always love cute banter. Kyouya is so mysterious and hot. -fans fangirl-self- |
| bugaboo107 2008-07-28 ch 1, | abuseHow cute! :3 |
| fire dragonheart 2008-07-19 ch 5, | abusenice |
| fire dragonheart 2008-07-19 ch 8, | abusenice |
| teeenaaa 2008-07-17 ch 8, | abuseErr, yea, really, what DOES he do with all the tissue paper? =P But I'm glad you're back from the dead xD As for chapter 8... =O no! Kyouya is perfect! There's no way he could be a horrible cook! Excuse me while I detain my inner fangirl. ANYWAY. Somehow, although I can't actually imagine Kyouya being bad at anything, he IS human after all, so I suppose he must have some faults =P Thanks for updating! =] these shorts are wonderful for lightening my mood and preparing me for study xD |
| Kitty-hiime 2008-07-16 ch 7, anon. | abuseMaybe he's using them to wrap gifts for all of the rich clients he is schmoozing with? I just really loved the 'plant a new forest in the amazon' line. Perfect! XD |
| Kitty-hiime 2008-07-16 ch 4, anon. | abuseI don't think you're losing your touch- I think that this is actually the best one yet! It's very...them, for lack of a better word, lol. Kyoya to me is a very subtle teaser (I'm making a reference to the picture one, I think number 2; I thought he was a little too blunt there) so his subtle affection is quite wonderful. |
| Lillith 06 2008-07-13 ch 8, | abusePoor Kyouya. He can't be perfect. And I always thought tha he was a horrible cook. So, can i make my request? Hades and Persephone. In my humble opnion this greek myth suits them somehow. |
| x-twilight-x 2008-07-13 ch 8, | abuseHey x Lol, I always had the suspicion Kyouya couldn't cook XD Otherwise, he'd be perfect, imagine the mayhem! Good job, this one made me laugh ^.^ About requests...how about sun or moon? Looking forward to the next one, Good luck with that course thingy XP Glad I'm not there yet lol. Ariana x |
| twilightjunkie1313 2008-06-06 ch 4, anon. | abusei love this, it defines the whole kyoya/haruhi relationship to perfection. Great job and nice working with a word limit- it makes every sentence count. -twilightjunkie1313 |
| teeenaaa 2008-05-24 ch 6, | abusePerfect =) Kyouya's confusion is totally realistic; I really love the way you delve into his mind so easily =) I can imagine him being taught about perfection and that he should strive for it, and I can imagine him trying to figure out, all these years on, what it actually is. And yay to the ending =D Many thanks for this! =) |
| teeenaaa 2008-05-22 ch 5, | abuseYou know what? I love the length of these, because they're so much easier and quicker to read xD Loving these shorts so far; I think it's a remarkable skill to be able to put so much depth into so few words =) And, you've managed to almost completely retain their original characters and personalities, so double the points for that =D I absolutely /adore/ your Kyouya, and KyouyaxHaruhi = LOVE. Many thanks for this =) looking forward to your next update! |
| x-twilight-x 2008-05-16 ch 3, | abuseAaw, that was really cute XD I love these. Please keep it up! I look forward to the next one x |