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Reviews for: Makeshift Fort
Lord Rebecca-Sama
2009-10-18 . chapter 1
rotfl that was a cute, weird, funny, story lol. loved it!

Lord Rebecca-Sama
PervyMonk
2008-06-28 . chapter 1
Cute! ^__^
vespirak
2008-05-14 . chapter 1
cool! Funny! 1 question, though: is this from when they were chained together? if it is, how did Light get his shirt off? Seriously, that always bugs me.
Shadowsole
2008-05-14 . chapter 1
Best humor story ever
Satora-chan
2008-05-13 . chapter 1
I love how you gave L and Light a romantic relationship without making that the focus of the story. In fact, it enhances it. Also, the image of L hiding in a makeshift fort of pillows of blankets is hilarious.
GypsieKitsune
2008-05-13 . chapter 1
so adorable!!me likey.
professorkatze
2008-05-13 . chapter 1
haha ^_^ Cute lil oneshot. I especially liked the last few paragraphs, cuz technically you could have left if off when they went to sleep and everyone was drowning in warm fuzzies (XD), but the way you ended it was beautifully in character. Well done *gives you cookie*
Sarahfreak
2008-05-11 . chapter 1
I really did enjoy reading this fic and now I can't get out of my head the picture of a mass of blankets pilled up and a tuft of black hair sticking out of the top *grin* [I’ll have to make myself a pillow/blanket fort]. Absolutely adore this...great writing. Loved it!
SoraXNamine
2008-05-09 . chapter 1
YAY I'm the first review!! Good fic, I'm still laughing XXD
MiaoShou
2008-05-09 . chapter 1
Bless... they're so childish! XD Love the big soft castle!

It's sweet to see Light indulging L's night-time games :)
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