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| AK-tiger 2008-05-14 ch 1,  | abuseo this is going to be good. more plz! |
| Mellow girl 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is so sad!! I hope this is not what happens on the show. Great Story! |
| lily moonlight 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseWow. This was very powerful. Really good, starkly written and with a huge impact. I think Mac carries a lot of guilt, which you've conveyed here very simply with his memories. It works really well with the minimum of description, and the snaps of dialogue between Mac and Stella. And a fantastic ending. That epitomises their relationsip I think. |
| shawdoo 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseVery nice story. You captured Mac and his guilt beautifully. His and Stella's friendship is so obvious in the last few lines. Thanks for sharing. |
| tidbit2008 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseNicely written. True to character. Thanks for sharing. |
| ThnksFrThMmrs87 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseLoved it. I kind of fail at reviews because all I can say is that it was wonderful |