This is hilarious! Excellent story - I love Ziva tricking everyone with her ninja skills, and then Gibbs get one over her... brilliant :D I hope you plan to write more.

I really got to say that that was the coolest mystery game i've read. I sincerely thought it would be Ducky for a second there.

Loved this story and I knew at once that Ziva was the communist as soon as she took her red jacket off...I mean seriously how would Gibbs expect McGee to hold up the role of lying to everyone?! Haha
From A Fanfiction Angel

oh that was a perfect ending.
I had no idea who the commie was,
so WOOT to you haha.

Yes, it was as good as the previous ones, which were all GREAT.

overall, i LOVED the story [[i really wanna play that Commie game sometime, i think it'd be so awesome!]]

and i loved Ziva's reaction - 'but i already knew that!' haha.



and, Jenny =[
I still get depressed over Kate, imagine how long this will take me to get over =[
i cant believe they gave us such an amazing [yet CRAPPY!! why did they do what they didd, so sadd.] finale...

anyway,
fabulous story, keep on writing =]

♣radica

Thanks for the update! I really like this story!

HAHA.
That was a great story, loved the game. Never heard of it before so i am going to try it out on my friends when they next come over. Thanks for a greath story made me laugh so much, And i also though that Ziva would be the Communist.

Thanks Again. x

lol ... that was great! one thing though..i could actually read the name before i read the paragraph before it! :-)

ROFL! LAUGHING MY BUTT OFF! THAT WAS SO FUNNY! i suspected her when the red jacket thingy presented itself. this is so going on favorites!

Ha! That was hilarious! I loved the prize. :)Very nicely written and it really sounds like a fun game.

Good ending!

And I didn't know who the communist was either!

Oh man i was wrong i thought Gibs would have the been the communist. Oh to bad but i loved it any way. Good job i loved it. You did a great job.

HA!

You should do a sequal where Ziva is kidnapped and she's tortured for information and she doesn't crack. Then they'd *really* know that she was best at espionage.

aw... please please please please please update soon! this is really really good!:P

oh boy oh boy oh boy!



cliffhangers make me very excited =]


again, you know it's coming:

Update! Update! Update!!


oh and btw...
im changing my account [it's giving me difficulties...]
so im 'forensic01'
if all goes as planned.



xx-radica

O great chapter! I can't wait for more!