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| MoonStarDutchess 2008-06-15 ch 1,  | abuseI think this was very good. More entertaining that that one dudes. |
| Maestro of the End 2008-06-15 ch 1, | abuseJust going to throw this on ye ole grill and see how it sizzles. All you're stories seem to involve an almost unrealistic desire to tell anyone who asks who a certain person is "in love" with. You also seem to portray very...unrealistic fight scenes for such normal humans. It's not easy to throw someone into a wall, but you write th fight scenes like the characters are superheroes. All your stories also seem to follow the same plotline. Sure, the settings change, and maybe some are longer than others, but in the end it's just different slices on a loaf of bread. To wrap it up, you're characters act incredibly childish, and you're dialogue is really stale, the people feel like cardboard cutouts. Don't get me wrong I've mostly enjoyed your writing, it's just that I think you might need to diversify a little bit, maybe try switching things up. ``MotE |
| raven shadow heart 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abusei loved this story! Very well written,great story! |
| Pikachu407 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseI love It! anyways good story and hope you make a sequel to this or another story! |
| ravenrocks191 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseAweSoME oneshot! |
| -BeeVee-THEEAmazing 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseAww, this was really cute. I agree, it was a little rushed, but aren't all one shots rushed?? Thats how it seems to me... LOVED IT! As always. Toodles! -Bee- |
| ColorsOfTheSky101 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseOoh, wow. Heh. I loved how Sam walked in and stopped the fight. Very dramatic right there. It made me go aww when Freddie said those things about Sam, while meanwhile she was listening! Gr8 job! |
| LeavexItxAllxToxMe 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseI liked it =) Didn't think it was rushed at all. |
| breiteliza 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseThat was the best oneshot I've read on fanfiction. keep up the great work |
| taralynnlove 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abusei like the way you made it a oneshot and didnt go on about jake and carly. it was really good! |
| crono 2008-05-09 ch 1, anon. | abusedude you rock!! |
| Ducklin 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseWell in my opinion this oneshot is awsome! Including the fight! I thought the fight was the best part of the whole story! |