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| Dur'id the Druid 2008-09-06 ch 1,  | abuseJust adding this to my favoites. |
| JovianJeff 2008-09-05 ch 17, | abuseA delightful addition to the ongoing saga. |
| Larsnitro 2008-09-04 ch 17, | abuseYAH AN UPDATE, GREAT STORY, KEEP IT UP. KILL THE QUORUM. |
| Jerry Unipeg 2008-09-04 ch 17, | abuseGREAT CHAPTER! (*x4) OPh boy, they had make a BIG! mistake. |
| xicq 2008-09-04 ch 17, | abuseFinally updated..Great chapter but I think letting the quorum go that easy is gonna bit them in the ** |
| JovianJeff 2008-08-08 ch 16, | abuseThis chapter felt more like a morality play than a continuation of the story. Still it was something likely to have come up and dealt with in an interesting manner. |
| Lars 2008-08-04 ch 16, anon. | abuseSweet, major culture shattering time. Can't wait to see how this turns out, I ashamed to be a Gemini now. |
| xicq 2008-08-02 ch 16, | abusegreat!looking forward to the next chapter!juz call heindol into the conference room n take a kodak moment LOL |
| Jerry Unipeg 2008-08-02 ch 16, | abuseI LOVE THIS CHAPTER! (*x5) About time the Colonials learn the true history. |
| readerofgoodfanfiction 2008-08-02 ch 16, | abuse'Genetic Lockout of his Reproductive Functions' OUCH! Now that hurts. |
| PhanCommand 2008-07-26 ch 12, anon. | abuseany idea when the next update is? you were going at a decent speed then suddenly stopped. is it soon |
| mastapsi 2008-07-17 ch 5, | abuseThere is a technical issue with this chapter. The problem is here: "we jump a distance of eighteen light minutes. We emerge from hyperspace just in time to watch the module explode with the force of fifteen megatons." The problem is that since the ship is now 18 light-minutes from the explosion, it would in fact take 18 minutes for the explosion to be observed by visible light detection. |
| JovianJeff 2008-07-16 ch 15, | abuseA very nice and touching chapter. Thank you for continuing this story! |
| Jerry Unipeg 2008-07-02 ch 15, | abuseGREAT CHAPTER! (*x4) I think Trea is right. |
| Snowdove30 2008-06-23 ch 14, | abuseExcellent update. |