So cool, I love it, please update.

Great story! Hope to see more soon!

SARAH

It's really coming together. Pretty good.

One of the most interesting openings I have read.

Awesome.

oh. this is rather interesting. do update soon, hmm?

This is great so far. When you have the time please continue. I am sorta on a Buffyverse kick right now and reading tons of crossovers. I would have never thought Dawn and Jack but that just shows how awesome you are to pair them. She's a green ball of energy and he's immortal. I can't wait to read what happens next.

Are you going to update?

I've been waiting for an update, and huzzah on a day when nothing went right I got one, which truly put a smile on my face.

I adore Dawns reaction to this, she doesn't accept it right away, she is a ball of emotions, and Jack? Well, poor Jack I feel simply awful for him.

Loved the Jack/Ianto banter too.

Keep up the great work!

Okay, whoever or whatever took teenage Dawn's mind and put it into an adult MARRIED version of Dawn is going to get some major buttkicking if Dawn ever finds out whoevers responsible. And I don't think it'll be just the Buffy gang doing the pummeling either. *lol* If Dawn remebers then what about Buffy and the rest of the gang? Are they looking for her teenage self even now, or is this the future since Dawn's body is all grown up?

LOVED IT.

Jack's emotion was great. You painted a lovely picture, especially Dawn's reaction. Most fic's have her just getting over it so easily when she's thrown into some strange situation, you're actually dealing with it, I like it.

Longer chapters would be nice, but I like how quickly we got an update. :D

I just recently got into Torchwood and I adore it. I adore Jack more than words. Then add to the fact that I love Buffy and I love Dawn so much.

And now this fic. I love the idea of Jack/Dawn together, just because they both have...well, you can do a lot with them.

I like the start of this, my only complaint is wishing it was longer! I hope you continue!

Great idea, I think its interesting and you should really continue with it! Good luck.