 Jason M. Lee 2008-07-12 . chapter 18Theory of everything... String Theory! XD Been watching that ep too many times.
Thunderblast, 'Bee, and 'Cade as the youngest? That's a different spin. |
 Jason M. Lee 2008-07-05 . chapter 17*snerk* Magnus stuck with Grimlock. Well, there's still a chance. |
 cmdrtekk 2008-07-05 . chapter 17Great job with this chapter. BOth conversations were well done. |
 Jason M. Lee 2008-07-02 . chapter 16But patience can be rewarding at times, Springer! |
 Speakfire 2008-07-02 . chapter 5You demonstrate one of the things I love the most about autobots, and that's their willingness to put their lives on the line to help save friends. |
 Speakfire 2008-07-02 . chapter 2Excellent story, and I like how you've made Megatron more misunderstood than evil. |
 Speakfire 2008-07-02 . chapter 3You have a real talent for writing. I love how the stories are short, I have a hard time reading the long Cybertronian stories because I'm so unfamiliar with the characters. Good short stories tend to give you insight into each character's personality without requiring that you know the name and personality details of every single character. |
 cmdrtekk 2008-06-29 . chapter 15Awesome chapter. A great piece of work on the twins argument. Could totally picture the scene. |
 Jason M. Lee 2008-06-28 . chapter 15"You’ve got no arms left!"
Pfft... *tries to stick with snickering but fails* ROFLMAO Hee hee...! I'm sorry, but I couldn't help myself. X3
"...(the Prime was not amused)." *snerk* "We are not amused" much?
Lovable piece on the twins, Prowl, and Ratch here. And fitting on Prowl with "But you do have my permission to manually put them in stasis lock if they get too out of hand" to Ratchet. Betcha Ratch would try to use that fully to his advantage as much as possible. :3 |
 Jason M. Lee 2008-06-25 . chapter 14*snickers at the various references* Cohrada from BW Neo, Nova with his expansionist ideals with Jhiaxus as his head scientist, Vector Sigma to Vector Prime... Nicely condensed Cybertron History 101. Who was the speaker? Ratbat? |
 Jason M. Lee 2008-06-21 . chapter 13Ah, logical Shockwave... And interesting start with the Constructicons here.
Logic can get you so far before you hit a wall or a loop -- heck a Moebius strip! |
 Jason M. Lee 2008-06-18 . chapter 12Oy, tension much? |
 cmdrtekk 2008-06-15 . chapter 11A really good chapter. One of your best in this series. |
 Jason M. Lee 2008-06-14 . chapter 11Ah, the beginnings of such a wonderful relationship.
And a painful one, at that. :3 |
 Jason M. Lee 2008-06-11 . chapter 10Love how you have Megatron interrupting Soundwave every time he tries to say "Lord High Protector". |