cute, I like it:)

Wow - another great part of this story :)

Whne is Gil gonna show up at the Cabin

Okay, let me the first to say, I think this turned out very well.

I love this line: "dreaming of nothing but a beautiful meadow just a mile away, and a porch rail that desperately needed to be replaced."

Your characterizations of our CSI's are always spot on, and your original characters are brilliant.

Good job.