i just read chapter 5 and i love your story. People who think this story sucks wouldnt know a good story if it kicked them in the nuts. I hope you keep writing.



PS: i think you spelt Pein wrong i thought it was Pain..

i like this story alot. It has a good plot and its entertaining to read. I hope chapter 5 isnt the last chapter cause i just finished chapter 4 and i dont want it to end so soon.

Hey! I love the plot for this story. It's very intriguing and you've portrayed the characters quite well. Plus, I'm a NaruSaku dan and I think you did an excellent job with the pairing. I can't wait for your updates. Please update soon. I'm really excited about this. Thanks!:D

Ria

i actually think ur a pretty good writer, and the first ch of my first story is coming up so plz read it when it comes out!

Can't wait to see where the story goes. Please update soon, it has been three whole months.

it a cool story i like it and this is a great Idea

Well that has been a good length of reading. Very entertaining I'd say. So, leaving a review... since I'll be putting this on my alert story. I think you could use a beta, you'd be surprise how many there are available out there. I did a whole fic, kinda went on hiatus, and ultimately stopped writing it after years of failed attempts to continue it. But my second fic is doing much better, since I finally got a beta reader. Having a good beta reader really helps. They're your first readers and secondary spell/grammar checker, they give their comments, and they definitely try pointing out mistakes.

Generally, I like this kind of fics where there aren't too lengthy or too short conversations, and there must be reasonable paragraphing in between them. So congratulations, you're one of them.

P.S; You're a late updater just like me, huh? Chuckles. I never update unless I'm happy with the length I've typed, (usually never below 15 pages). Anyways, I'll be looking forward to when you update, no matter how long it takes!

Hey, great story. You should definately continue it, it has great potential, and this idea was genius.

OMG! Dis story kickass i like it alot so i can't wait til ur next update, come bk soon kay!^^
Go NaruSaku!

Sorry I didn't review earlier. I should add something to my profile that says something like if your story is added to my alerts then I like it and I want to see where it is going. Anyways I will review from now on. This is a rather interesting story and I have a few ideas as to where the plot is going but I will keep them to myself for I do not wish to spoil anything with a lucky guess. Keep up the good work.

haha! kakashi is a wise-*. liked the end of the chapter it made me laugh. cant wait for the next 1.

well things are starting to move along now...it'll be interesting to see what is in the box...

Wow, I really love this so far!
You're such a great writer, I love how you're so descriptive.
I especially loved chapter 3, kukuku. XD

lol more faves then reviews XD LOL

nice story O.O and u also read the jap manga XD