 Tracey Claybon 12/4/01 . chapter 1This story was well written, had a couple of isolated grammar errors - but nothing major, and I really enjoyed reading it... The one thing that I wanted to bring to your attention - if you weren't already aware of it - was that your HTML formatting whacked out a little - the whole story is acting like a link, and the links at the bottom of the story aren't active... If you get the chance, email me the link to McGinty's - I'd love to see the site!
Cheers,
Tracey |