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Gratuitous 2008-06-20 ch 16,	abuseFinally! The site is working for me again, thank goodness! I'm a sucker for a good happy ending, and this one was so sweet! The entire series was fun to read - please don't stop writing! Yay Elphie! =D
TillITryIllNeverKnow 2008-06-19 ch 16,	abuseThank you for the lovely wrap up. I really really enjoyed your story and believe me, I'm looking forward to your next! Thank you for all the enjoyment! I'll be watching!
Scarlet Quill 2008-06-18 ch 5,	abuseWow! I can really see progress in your writing through this piece, whether you're taking the feedback from other writer's and utilizing it, or just improving as you go you are making WONDERFUL strides towards developing your own sense of style, and i think this chapter is probably the first real indication of that. It has a nice balance of dialogue and description without sinking into the dreaded "purple prose" curse of many new writers. Altogether a really nice illustration of your talent. Continue to work on your writing, you have ability!
Drop Your Oboe 2008-06-18 ch 16,	abuseHow'd I guess? ;) That's sweet. Thank you for making me also very happy. 'Til next time, then. See you around.
Iwillalwaysbeyoursinmyheart 2008-06-18 ch 16,	abuseAw! I wish it wasn't over. Cam't wait to read your new one.
elphiethegood 2008-06-18 ch 16, anon.	abusethat was good. Just one thing, and this might be an issue with but when someone else speaks you need seperate paragraphs like this: "Come meet your son," Elphaba sad. Fiyero stepepd closer to the bed. "He's beatutiful." I know not the right lines but just an example. Anyway, great story! Looking foward to the next one.
Iwillalwaysbeyoursinmyheart 2008-06-16 ch 15,	abuseaw...i dont want it to end. :(
TillITryIllNeverKnow 2008-06-16 ch 15,	abuseThank heavens Fiyero is human again! I love Boq's line, "Yeah sorry about the whole witch hunter thing. I feel really bad now." Well, that should make everyone forget all the problems! I love it! I'll miss your story when it's done. Keep writing!
Drop Your Oboe 2008-06-15 ch 15,	abuseI'll miss it too. "Reunition isn't a word." "Elphaba would you stop being smart for just a clock tick!" Oh, burn, /burn/. For both of them. =) Oh my god! Glinda remembered his name right! Wow. I'll be sad to see it go, but I'm glad it made you happy. Hope to see the epilogue soon!
Iwillalwaysbeyoursinmyheart 2008-06-14 ch 14,	abuseDANG! Write more.
DefyingGravity4ever 2008-06-14 ch 14,	abuseOh, I like it! Your chapters are short and sweet, but you do suspense just as well.
Iwillalwaysbeyoursinmyheart 2008-06-12 ch 13,	abuseHA! Stupid Boq. lol. Love it. continue please!?
Drop Your Oboe 2008-06-12 ch 13,	abuse...why is she a wicked cat? Wait. Does that mean Fiyero's a scarecrow again now? Hehe. I love how he's just like, "Thanks." Sorry. It't just, it made me giggle. Yay! Boq's on their side now! (or could be, at least. Hmm.)
TillITryIllNeverKnow 2008-06-12 ch 13,	abuseJust so you know, the first few lines of this chapter caused me to yell out loud, "YES!!". I think i scared a rabbit in the yard! Awesome chapter! I really like the fact that Boq is human again, maybe he'll be less "testy" now! Please, please update soon! And thanks for not making us w.. a.. i.. t a while on that gallows.
Drop Your Oboe 2008-06-11 ch 12,	abuseYou stole Sarima!! (but I promise I won't tell =P) "Fifteen minutes later Glinda emerged from the bathroom. That shower was by far the quickest shower I have ever taken she thought to herself." Yes. So, so true. I love long showers. No! Don't stop, please don't. 'Cause then we don't get to figure out if Elphie gets hanged or not! (By Boq! That's harsh. What, does the Lion catch her next?) Or if Fiyero gets there in time and saves her. Though I don't think you'd kill her. ...right? What I like about this story is that some stories are really, really long, and you need to read all of it to get what's going on. This one- such the opposite. You keep it short and sweet and I got it, even though I read it quickly. Thanks. Now go and banish every thought you had about assuming bad things and not continuing, and write some more. =)

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