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| x.vampire.girl.x 2008-07-01 ch 1,  | abusehey i loved it! It would have been cool if u wrote what the boys said to him after but still it was cool! 2 thumbs up :) |
| Devon 2008-06-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseUm this is amazing! |
| roxy 2008-06-16 ch 1, anon. | abusei love this fanfic so much! |
| IcelandGirl812 2008-06-14 ch 1, | abuseLove love love it! I love your writing from Kartik's point of view! Please write more in his point of view! I really hope you do! Ok, too many exclamation points, sorry. I can get a bit carried away with them. But once again, it was TERRIFIC! Please please please write more! |
| mebmarker24 2008-06-08 ch 1, | abusewonderful, wonderful, wonderful |
| Sasha693 2008-06-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMG! aw it was so cute and i loved it. i'm currently reading the second book and its amazing but im u to a very sad part. |
| Michelle 2008-06-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseReally good! this was kinda what I imagined in my mind, except a little more enthusiastic. anyway, well done! |
| GeorgiaPeaches 2008-06-01 ch 1, | abuseSweet, I love this. Terribly interesting. |
| Me 2008-05-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was great, thanks for giving us a glimpse of Kartik's POV. |
| tragicxtears 2008-05-22 ch 1, | abuseI loved it. you do wonderfully in kartik's point of view. =) |
| IzzyCullen 2008-05-19 ch 1, | abuseLol I would steal Kartik if I could however the position he's in now makes him hard to steal. -sniffle- Anyways this was good, you should write the series from his point of veiw, your pretty good at it. |
| Someone else 2008-05-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseI absolutely loved it. Please write more. I really enjoyed the way you had him convinced that he didn't really like her. I would love to see other scenes too! Especially the ones where he sees her for the first time in RA and TSFT. This is definitely one of my favorite stories on here, and I am pretty hard to please ( I don't like much else on here :- ) ) good job! |
| SassyAni 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseAh, the kiss. The fateful kiss that leads to thier eventual union in the cave in a Sweet Far Thing. I love the way you write, and I'm hoping that you will put another chapter, because in no way is Kartik's story over. Spectacular job! |
| romance-addict44 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseWow. |
| lasting illusion 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseI loved this soo much!! I love Kartik Pov's but I dont think there is nearly enough stories of them! I really like the way you wrote this part! Like the Kartik and Gemma moments are always my fav. part of the book and you really really did justice on this one, it was AMAZING! lol i love the end, when he kinda hesitates, thinking hm wait a minute did i like that kiss. lol Also I was always kinda confused and never really liked the fact that he asked Gemma about Pippa, but I like your take on it, where it was just because he was looking for another subject to talk about, and it was the first thing that came to mind. Now is the big question...I was wondering if maybe you could either do more oneshots of Kartik's Pov, or maybe a story, in KArtiks pov, of one of the three books. I just think your an amazing writer,and if you did, I would be your number one reader lol. Really, sory but one more time: THIS ROCKS! :) Okay I hope you will consider the Kartik idea... :D |