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Aly the Trickster
2008-05-20 . chapter 1
Hehe, it's me. *hides in a corner*
DON"T HURT ME!
Sorry, my life's been really busy and all those crappy excuses that shouldn't actually take priority. I know I sorta disappeared off the face of the earth, but I am back now, and the chapter shall get to you by the end of the month!
Anyways, nice story, I like it, but I wonder. I don't think that this is mention NejiHina. I think she is resigned to the fact that she will have to marry her cousin, but she is not happy about it. She wants to marry Naruto, yet Neji is the only one her father would ever approve of. She admires Neji, and he is above all other Hyuugas in her eyes, but that does not mean she sees him in any way besides admiration. But, as always, I love your work, and I loved the story, but I don't agree that there is any mention of NejiHina.
And that is my very long review to try and pacify your wrath. I shall now hide under the nearest strategically placed rock. Bye Bye.
~Ari
JGOG132
2008-05-12 . chapter 1
Aw man, I feel sorry for poor Hinata already. Man, what's the deal with putting up a story like this? Are you actually a fan of this pairing? Curiousity is the reason I ask. Besides that, I don't mean to be persistent, but when are you going to start the story I suggested?
kawaiiitahina123
2008-05-09 . chapter 1
Well written and really sad for her.
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