Reviews for The Power of the Mind

Scarlet Starlet of the Wind 2008-06-01 ch 1,	abuseDear BlackWolfHowling, Beautiful! :D That was absolutely beautiful! :D Criticism: You could expand on it just a teeny tiny bit more, and you've used the wrong "there." (Where you wrote "their", it was supposed to be "there." It's okay, everyone's done that, about a million times, including me...) With Christian Love, Scarlet Starlet of the Wind
FlamingQuill 2008-05-19 ch 1,	abuseCool! Great job, BlackWolf :D
takenbyHim 2008-05-10 ch 1,	abuseReally great poem. I can totally relate. Thanks for putting this up. It really encouraged me. A title, I don't know, the words "Forget Me Not" kept popping into my head so maybe you can come up with title some of those. :)
mariposa sabrosa 2008-05-10 ch 1,	abuseOh, I get this, and I actually kind of like it :p Nah, really, it's good. Only one thing, though... use "there" instead of "their". "Their" is possessive, meaning it's "their property" or "their problems". Various people's things. "Their". "There" is used for when something is "there". Other than that, good. The darkness went away pretty quickly lol! A title? Hm. I would think the theme is about the easiness of switching from terror to comfort. And the variable is God. So, use that as a way to come up with your title. The Power of the Mind, or something like that. Good luck! ;] chocolate chip!