Best tale I've seen all day.

Blew. My. Mind. And that's hard to do.

I'd fill this space with praises and critique, but frankly I don't think any postured words and reiteration can top those I've already spoken.
Added to favorites without pause.

By the way, Brooklyn accent? Kek. Best VO for Falco was in StarFox 64.

Keep up the spectacular work, Umbra!

See you on the run,
Wolf

Damn, so disappointing to see this story end but hey, it has to end somewhere and somehow right? I totally loved this story and I love your writing. Keep up the amazing work. I'm now off to read your other two fics so expect to here more from me ;)

~CK13~

Holy sweet $hit that was an awesome scene! I LOVED EVERY PARY OF IT! The only thing I was hoping for was a little more fist-fitting with Fox and Wolf but sword fights are just as good too. Same with Falco and his gangster accent. Really, a great chapter and I hope to see more from you!

~CK13~

OMG Haha, I love how badass you made Wolf and ROB in this chapter. Lots of fighting and swearing, just what I like to see in a Star Fox fic. Of course, I can't write that stuff to save my life but you pull it off great! I'm off to read the next part and to comment on how you are God when it comes to writing. Later!

~CK13~

WOW! This has seriously got to be the best story I've read so far! I love your style of writing and the fact that you write A LOT of it! Must...keep...reading...more...of your work!

~CK13~

After reading the whole thing now, I can clearly say this is an absolute masterpiece! You have potential, thats for sure! Only thing I didn't like was the anti-climactic end to the fight. I do believe it should have had no victor in it but it could have been done better. Otherwise, you got a keeper.

9.75/10

I just read the first part. The first half was well written and description was great! But the 2nd half of that whole thing was a freaking acid trip man! Some extremely messed up stuff going on. It works well with the situation Fox is going through, but MAN! THAT WAS HARDCORE! I am actually willing to say we have a new up and coming Stephen King here. Im gonna read part two and post a review for that section as well.

...yeah, I should leave an in-depth review, but then I'd have to reread the entire thing. I'm just reviewing to let you know that I read this a while back and enjoyed it.

I loved it, I imagined Wolf going so far to fight Fox, and the way you had ROB fight was awesome

Hey man whats up. I heard you mention this when you replied to my other review for 'Cubs'. I kept telling myself to go read this. And now I did. I gotta say, WOW man. Freaking amazing. I know this sounds like a generic compliment(circumstances make it sound that way) but belive me. Tobias Umbra= WRITER. Can't wait to see the next 'Cubs' chapter.

... Wow. I must say. You have got some of the craziest writing skills; I can't even explain. Being able to write all that crazy stuff like those hallucination sequences. Such as the intimacy with/spontaneously combusting of Krystal and the Andross Scene... Just... so very visual and such palpable feelings and going ons that were often too painful/gross for comfort.

definetly a deliciously dark story; I loved reading every word.

Ha, I reviewed the first chapter, but I haven't gotten to reading the rest until today. And I must say I've enjoyed this fanfiction greatly. Excellent depictions of Fox and Wolf, and all the others. I really like this story.

I'll keep my eye out for your next Star Fox fic, whether it's a continuation of this, or a new story entirely.

wow, this story was great. and i LOVE "carry on wayward son". great story.

theXbeat08

Holy farking carp. This is damn good. I'm not even going to comment about it in detail... one of the best SF stories I've read in a very, very long time. You better release the final part soon. That's all I'm going to say.

Wow, this is amazing...
You did great!