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| bionic4ever 2008-05-09 ch 6,  | abuseWhat a beautifully crafted story, from start to finish! I love how Father Nick is embraced by this family and helps to strengthen them while they strengthen him as well. The way AJ has finally accepted Oscar as a permanent family member was handled with a perfect, loving touch and brought a tear to my eye. The rescue was perfectly timed and well-detailed. Great job! And...thank you for including Jacky! He made the bright red ribbon at the end one of your very best! |