| Reviews for Chipmunk Tales: Tale of the Ultimate Heartbreak |
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kami2000 4/26/11 . chapter 15Awe very cute story ! Write a sequal or something ! |
theodoreisthebest 12/30/09 . chapter 15Not bad.. not bad at all ) |
aurevoirshosanna 3/17/09 . chapter 5wow. It really gop intense in this chpater, I really loved it. (; |
Kali101 10/19/08 . chapter 15AWESOME! I AM GLAD IT ENDED UP BEING BRITT AND ALVIN BACK TOGETHER AND NOT THAT STUPID ALYSSA PERSON! EW! BUT YES I DO EXPECT TO SEE MORE STORIES FROM YOU ABOUT ALVIN AND BRITTANY! THAT WOULD BE AMAZING! SO YOUR AWESEOM AND SO IS THIS STORY! NEVER STOP WRITING ALVIN AND BRITTANY STORIES DEFINITELY!:):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):): ):):):):):):):) -Kaleigh! |
Northgalus2002 10/18/08 . chapter 15Yay! Alvin finally sees Alyssa for the rhymes-with-witch she is! That fight between Brit and Alyssa was classic, as was the scene where Brit knocked Alyssa into the mud, and the way Alyssa backed down when Brit's sisters closed ranks behind her. So now Brit and Alvie are back together (though they still play pranks on each other), cool! Only one question, that part in the previous chapter where Brit trashes all her Alvin memorabila, is she going to start rebuilding her collection? Keep writing! |
DiceRox09 10/18/08 . chapter 15Aw yay! I was waiting for them to get back together! And that was so cute :]] But wow. Alyssa is stupid x] How do you make a mistake like that, infront of him and everyone? That has to be the worst way you can ever possibly slip up. But aw. Everyone clapped too :] Yay :P x] This was SUCH as cute story. I loved it. And I can't wait to see you finish your other stories :] |
Jamie73 10/18/08 . chapter 15ABSOLUTELY LOVED THE ENDING! Jamie |
Alvin'sBaby80 10/18/08 . chapter 15YES! ALVIN AND BRITTANY 4EVER and poor Alyssa...NOT!I'm glad Brittany went after her she deserved it! Trying to get between Alvin and Brittany that's just rude and her sisters Oh yea loved the ending...You're an amazing writer! |
Aquapphire 10/18/08 . chapter 15Aww, it's really over now? Haha, the warm water trick xD! lol This story is/was good. If it really is over, plz say complete on the front thing of it! :) I'm not being mean, just sayin' ;) |
animeaddict2323232 9/30/08 . chapter 14Wohoo! |
DiceRox09 9/30/08 . chapter 14o.o Wow There was SO much in this chapter xDD Bahahaha Wow. I love Alvin and Britt xDD Haha. The breakfast thing was just.. hilarious. And I love Elly and Jean at the end. Hah. I CAN'T WAIT.. to see what Britt does x] I'm excited x] UPDATE SON! |
Alvin'sBaby80 9/30/08 . chapter 14Come on enough already get rid of that little conniving ooh...Alvin belongs with Brittany not that back stabbing little tramp ALYSSA!I can't read thi9s anymore it's getting too depressing for me! |
Jamie73 9/30/08 . chapter 14Long chapter long chapter! That was brilliant! Beautiful! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Jamie |
Northgalus2002 9/29/08 . chapter 14This is the first time I am reviewing this fic. I've read the previous chapter about how Alyssa stole away Alvin and caused him to react so badly to Brit. I know that Brit is a drama queen, but I was astonished at how Brit wrecked her Alvin memorablilia. But now, Brit is saying she still loves Alvie? And she is determined to get him back. How does Brit show up Alyssa and get Alvin to see Alyssa's using him? I know how stubborn Alvie can be, can she do it? Might I suggest that Brit end up in the hospital, and ends up fighting for her life, because of Alyssa and Alvie realizes he still loves Brit? That he would break up with Alyssa and stays by Brit's side until she recovers? I would love that sort of plot twist. Just a suggestion. Please put this couple back together! |
Kali101 9/29/08 . chapter 14AWEOME! WORDS CANT EVEN DESCRIBE IT! I JUST WISH ALVIN AND BRITT WOULD GET BACK TOGETHER ALREAYD ITS KILLING ME! AH! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON LIKE U HAVE BEEN! YOU ARE TRULY FABULOUS! Lol! :):):):):):):):):):):):) -Kaleigh! |