Nicely done. Good build-up of suspense. And I liked the interaction between Jack and Jacob at the end.

OMG. Awesome. Awesome! Totally and completely awesome! :D

Good but I would have liked it better if you hadn't put any UST or "romance-y" crap in it at all.

Wow. This would have been a more interesting development for the episode. They really get out in the nick of time too much, it would be good to see some actual repercussions and aftermath, and not just when they kill off a character. Though I think if this happened, Jack would have been beyond mad at Sam for letting herself die and not letting him help with his one last breath.

Excellent!

Excellent.

The ending is beautiful.

Harrowing version of what could have happened. Well done as always.

Ah...the workings of Jack O'Neill's mind. We know there's always a lot more going on there than we're every allowed to observe on the surface. Great job, hon! So much angst packed into so few (but so well-chosen) words! A very nice point of view from one of our favorite stories.

Indeed, Jack; no other choice. Wonderful angst and a super rework of that scene. Totally got it and believed it. Jack's character, Jacob's insight, Sam's last gesture - perfect. Kudos and thanks for this thoughtful read.

This is fantastic. The urgency and desperation are raw and believable, and the let-down of the exhaustion following and the need to keep contact with Carter is painfully tense. Nice work.

A very intense story!

I like this but that was a *scary* death scene. Ugh, the idea of drowning just...freaks me out!

This is really good. I like how you managed to capure the emotions of the characters without bluntly stating their feelings.

Perfect angst & characterizations! Such a satisfying story!