good story.

since this was written in 2008, maybe you haven't seen the new **-kicking sakura yet...?

I loved it, soo much! It was great! You should make it longer, just so people (and me) can read more of this wonderful story! The ending...you can't help but smile. I will so look up more of your stories, so keep writing!

Oh, I love this chapter, its so sweet! But I'm kinda sad the next one is the last chapter! *sigh* I guess I'll just read it then, this was such a good story...

I likee the story, but geez, everybody hates Sasuke!

Wonderful fic, simply stunning. I liked that you brought up the issue of Sasuke knowing he was wrong but continuing in his actions. I think it'a a quandary myself. If someone doesn't realize their own problems/faults, then they can be seen as innocent but they're still continuing their actions and they're actually so inconsiderate that they don't even realize. On the other hand, if they do realize, they don't care enough or aren't making enough effort to change.

I'm glad Sasuke's no longer projecting some of his own faults on Hinata and that he's really on the road of healing now. Hinata really is the most amazing person, she's so kind and she's not just willing to help, she really does help. She does everything and asks for nothing in return, not even recognition.

Wow, Tenten was amazing and you kept Sasuke consistant and in character with his intelligence in deciphering her message. I can't help but feel sympathy for all of them. Sasuke and Hinata have especially difficult tasks. He needs to truly examine himself and accepts what he sees so that he can mature and grow. She needs to help him. Recognizing one's faults is extremely difficult though, no one likes to admit they have them or work to eliminate them.

Sasuke has problems but he also needs to learn how to deal with them instead of holding them inside and then lashing out, it's not a healthy way to live. It's amazing though, how we as people can judge others. Sometimes, we're right and it's incredible, we actually understand. Too often, we don't know everything, we're wrong, our actions only aggravate the situation. If only it was easier for people to talk, to express themselves and ask for help.

This chapter was so intense and the characters all had so much depth! I really love how you used Shizune, she doesn't get enough credit in canon. I really think you understand people and human nature, everyone is so real and reading about their problems is heart rending. You really know how to evoke emotion.

Sasuke was so realistic with his problems, I'm glad we got the explanation for what was in his bag. It's understandable that Sasuke can't explain the situation to others and is frustrated and angry, I'm just so amazed at how realistic and alive he is. I really liked this chapter from his perspective, it really developed his character.

wow, so that's why Sasuke was sent to detention. Nice work on Hinata's observational skills, she's very perceptive.

Wow, quite an original idea. I like the concepts your exploring with their characters. I wonder why Sasuke and Lee fought though.

I totally agree with you on the making a sequel thing, I liked the story as it is now so i see no reason for a sequel, the ending was perfectly made for an ending to a story like this and in an indirect way, it fit the original personalities of Sasuke and Hinat even if it is AU

loved reading this story!
v deep and interesting :)
and love to read that sequel oneshot full of fluffiness XD lol :D

Cool one ^+^ But watcha mean by "the end"? Hopefully not wat I got in mind >.< Say that...:)