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| Kristen 2008-05-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was so cute! Loved it, loved it, loved it! Kristen |
| csidle122333 2008-05-13 ch 1,  | abuseawe Keegan that was so cute I loved It. This year for mothers day My dauther Tara gave me a dimond bracelet I cried for like an hour the bacelet was the one I was the one I was looking at at Tiffany's and from Tiff,Tammy and my husbandd I got a maching earings anyway g2g lots of love. Sara Young |
| ishotsherlock 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseAW that was so cute. Any chance you will be doing more with ABBY(cause she's lovable). AKE:D |
| Neelloc12 2008-05-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat job, I loved it. That was so sweet. I liked how you did from both Abby and Sara's point of view. Are you going to do a father's day story with Abby too? |
| The Queen of Sin 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuse*bounces* I love abby! and I love gil! and I love sara! and I love the story! and I love YOU! *a lotta love from me today...* |
| theyHAUNTme 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseAww! So, cute! This was and amazing story...and I love the Abby character! This was an amazing story...loved it! |
| dog5697 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abusehey i love this story when are anynewones are coming |
| jade40 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseyour stories are awesome! like i said in another story gil, sara and children are a great combo. a question though why was sara mad and crying at gil maybe i missed it. peace |
| Flo1804 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseGreat to see Abby's return ! I love the way you write her, she's totally adorable... Best line : "I heard her yelling at Daddy a time or two that it was all his fault. I didn’t really understand what she had meant." Hehehe, I think I know why ;-)) ! Can't wait for seeing her asking her mom/dad in an ingenuous way "How do babies come ??"... Great story, many thanks for sharing it ! |
| BrookeGreene 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseI SO knew she was pregnant! Lol, not that it was exactly difficult to figure out. And haha, ten more links! I feel sorry for Abby though, she isn't allowed to use scissors?! How old is she in this? And then also, Sara doesn't let her eat chocolate very often! Omg! Poor soul. I see purposely missing the bus in her future. ;-) I loved the "Absolutely perfect…just like you." line. That's so sweet, even if it is slightly cheesy! Lol. |
| csimouse 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseI loved it! Terrific! |
| jirrG 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseThis was great! in fact, where I live, today (Saturday) is mother's day, even when I'm at school instead of being with my family. This story was beautiful, I loved it and I love Abby. You describe small children so well. Great job. |
| anna 2008-05-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseomg so cute! I loved it! |
| SARA SIDLE GRISSOM 08 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseThis is GREAT I can see them two being like that also |
| toothchick 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseThis story was just perfect!! I really love how you brought in Abby (after the girl-scout cookie story). When you do that it really seems to tie everything together--in a family sense! |