 scouting 2009-05-08 . chapter 1oh god
i bawled
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great writing
good story
keep it up
dklfjd
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 linear15cannon 2009-04-11 . chapter 1*sniffle* ...I'm not sure what to say... Well, I really liked the story, and I equally like your writing. The last letter Stan sent tore my heart. ...I feel bad for Kyle. |
 James Bathory 2008-12-28 . chapter 1Damn you!
You made me cry so bad, it's weird.
Wonderful Story. Made me feel so bad for Kyle. Stan is an egoistic ** for going to war. That's what I think. (Since War makes no sense at all anyway)
You're a great author! |
 super manako sohma 2008-11-12 . chapter 1aww...i cried |
 xemorockprincessx 2008-11-02 . chapter 1This story is beautiful. I cried throughout the wole thing. Amazing work. |
 The-Icon-Girl 2008-10-18 . chapter 1Damn the tears you have caused me...
Love it love it. Couldn't love it more. |
 Evil Lil Elf Man 2008-09-30 . chapter 1it cant end here!
no |
 NinetailedPanther 2008-07-15 . chapter 1THANKS TT^TT, i'm crying now, it was a beautiful sad story though |
 Wolbachia 2008-07-01 . chapter 1I am so very close to crying.
That was amazingly well written, though. Keep it up. Also, ** awesome song choice. Props, man. ;) |
 Nightmaretears 2008-05-29 . chapter 1Oh, christ.
That was /sad/, man. That was real sad.
Still, though. It was real good...I think you did a great job conveying the whole meaning of the thing. Your word choice was eloquent, and real pithy, too. No wasted phrases here.
Excellent.
But sad as hell. |
 Juliepulie 2008-05-11 . chapter 1Beautifull story. And a sad ending T_T.
It was very good writing ;). |
 Hoshyuki 2008-05-10 . chapter 1;__; That was really sad. I feel so bad for Kyle. *sniffles* And well, for Stan as well, but ya know. |
 FondOfThings 2008-05-10 . chapter 1no! Stan!
why did you make Kyle curse him? that's so sad...almost made me cry. seriously. (yes I know that I'm a baby, leave me alone) but, since it *did* almost make me cry, that means that it was very well written in order to draw any emotion from me. so kudos for that. nice job. |
 AfroAzn 2008-05-10 . chapter 1Amazing story. By the end of it, my eyes started to water. Keep it up. |