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Atmospheric Control
2008-07-20
ch 5,
abuseI am absolutely amazed with this story. I had my doubts when I first read 'Gary's childhood friend', but you pulled it off, my friend! This story made me want to cry when Gary was throwing up and hurting. That's how good I believe this story is. I hope that you post the next chapter and the ones after it soon. I'm looking forward to it.
MobMotherScitah
2008-05-19
ch 1,
abuseOh, my God! I love this story an cannot wait until the next chapter comes out! ^^

Scitah
FilipinaVii
2008-05-12
ch 2,
abusehey this is an amazing story and I am totally loving every word of it. You get another side of Gary and everything, and I fricken love the girl's dorm room sleeping thing scene lol. Keep making chapters cause this is really great!
-FilipinaVii
Ashleh
2008-05-10
ch 3, anon.
abuseOh. I love Gary stories. Especially the ones that don't make him out to be gay.

Very good story so far.

Update soon please. :)
Enter Name Here
2008-05-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseHmm I'm loving it! Update soon, this is a really good start. ^_^
Tinkies
2008-05-10
ch 1,
abuseGood story so far! Very intersting plot as well! Keep up the great work & please continue a.s.a.p.!! ^_^
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