Wow... what a fantastic ride! I really like your style... it's intelligent, well thought out, keenly observant, humorous and very creative. Really really good job!

No please he can't be thinking about the bet... not now!

What a great chapter... lovely powerful emotional scene at the start and then balanced with the hilarity of the food fight... the descriptions of which were amazing!

Gone from nicely simmering to boiled over to omg call the fire brigade! Wow

Simmered and positively boiled over! Wow... do you have a way with words!

And yep - Tony can be such an a** at times. Ziva is going to have so much fun.

“I’m going to do something I don’t usually do with women,” he said. She looked at him and raised her eyebrows. “I’m going to let you have the remote while I clean up. Don’t mistreat it.” - Classic DiNozzo.

You made them fall asleep... that was perfect!

Still nicely simmering away! I loved the call and response of your writing and the parallel thought processes of Tony and Ziva - especially the paras on big vs small and drunk or not drunk. Very well written.

I want to go to that hotel... a walk in tub! I haven't lived!

A very nicely simmering Tiva!

This is pure class... I like the parallels you've got going... both questionning whether they really want to go ahead and then both adamant that they'd be the one coming out on top!

The boxing metaphor is perfect... I've even got 'Eye of the Tiger' playing in my head now. Can't get it out of my head now... Argh!

'Mp' - oh brilliant... v clever... v funny!

Only just started reading but was hooked at Chapter 1.

Great story... although I miss the total happy end... I can really imagine a sequel to this story, would be great to have them use this experience to fall in love and go out... Great work though :D

Only from the first chapter it already sounds great... am reading what follows...

This was a great story which had me laughing out loud constantly. Plus, some of the scenes were kind of hot. I wonder if this is the beginning of a relationship? Don't forget to change your story status mark to complete by the way. Great work again!

Hilarious! So hilarious and sweet... and oh man, that Ziva chapter with the bondage almost killed me... that was SO like her. I loved the little endearing Tiva moments too, though I'm happy that you didn't have them profess their love to each other at the end.. that would have been far too predictable! Thanks for that awesome, super funny fic :)

hahaha great i loved it